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Open Poetry #18

Ode to Autumn

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-01-04 02:56 PM

Lightly brushing the canvas,
The twilight enchants us;
It lowers our voices
And heightens our senses.

Do you hear the boisterous
chants now?
Those are winds cheering on our hostess, --
Autumn dances.

Is it she that employs us?
Is it she that commands us?
Are we the sum of our choices?
Or the sum of chances?

Does it matter? –
Rejoice now!
She is spinning us senseless.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Shou-Lao
Junior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 48

1 posted 2002-01-04 04:35 PM

Very well put together piece.

Thanks for the chance to read

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-01-04 08:34 PM

Master~
I am so enjoying your wonderful thoughts~
Very, very nicely said~

'Rejoice now!
She is spinning us senseless.'

How beautiful is this ... I think VERY~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-01-04 09:03 PM

Your muse has been spinning some fine rhymes and thoughts. Keep spinning!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-04 09:08 PM

(sigh) Such a gorgeous vision, sweet friend, this Muse had me dreaming of playing in the piles of leaves and throwing them about! (big hugggsssssss) Wonderful work, dearest friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrey, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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