Bathing In Moonbeams (inspired by a line in Interloper's poem Bathing In Moonbeams)

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

0 posted 2002-01-04 02:00 PM

Bathing In Moonbeams

Upon the shifting sand we meet
feeling the warmth left by the sun
It’s the closing day with it’s heat
and evenings just begun

Holding hands as we walk along
with soft, warm sand beneath our feet
Our hearts are joined in lovers’ song
blended with waves makes it complete

A gentle kiss that builds the fire
that can’t be cooled from ocean breeze
Bodies embrace as two aspire
with hands and lips of lover’s tease

Our hearts together sharing dreams
the desires our pens write of
A passion that’s bathing in moonbeams
upon the timeless sands of love

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (01-04-2002 02:06 PM).]

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2002-01-04 02:07 PM

Ahh, now, that ocean breeze does fill the hearts with tenderness..very nice write you did here...very gentle smile

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-01-04 02:29 PM

Now it's my turn to sigh.
{sigh}
{sigh}
I am honored

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-01-04 05:43 PM

Karen, you know I am a sucker for seaside
romance....I love this poem...a lot...
Nicely done....ONE clone coming right up...

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-04 07:15 PM

Startime I could just feel the ocean breeze. Lovely poem. floria

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-04 08:31 PM

Oh Karen...this is sooo romantic....lovely!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-01-04 08:41 PM

Karen, this one goes straight into my favorites folder. It is beautiful, romantic, and flows like soft waves rolling onto the beach.

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-01-04 09:36 PM

yes.. definitely.. caught up in the romance and beauty in this write...

Wonderful!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2002-01-04 10:00 PM

Karen:

I think you are wonderful and I love this writing. I could feel every word. OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Great.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

9 posted 2002-01-04 10:26 PM

What a beautiful, romantic piece of writing! I loved the soft feel of this and the appeal of love and the sea. Wonderful images, I enjoyed!

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-01-04 11:27 PM

karen - I saw a moonbeam, but alas it was mine. But you can join me, any ole time...

BC

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

11 posted 2002-01-04 11:38 PM

Amazingly Beautiful...Startime. This is a stunning work of art, my dear friend. What a beautiful heart you have and what an awesome talent. ***Ivy Rose

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2002-01-04 11:42 PM

Fabulous work, Karen!! Much enjoyed this one.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

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Blue Heaven

13 posted 2002-01-05 01:04 AM

love those walks on the beach-- nice

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

14 posted 2002-01-05 07:45 AM

Wonderful passion in your words.
Moonbeams and sand...lovely imagery.

Deb

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2002-01-05 08:05 AM

Karen, you managed to put all my favorite things in here, romance, moonlight and the ocean. Beautiful!
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2002-01-05 08:13 AM

Karen,

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

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Victoria Australia

17 posted 2002-01-05 08:15 AM

This is a timeless write, *Soft sigh*
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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