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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-01-04 12:19 PM





Hello, am I alright?
have got just a small cold, nothing major
just staying in
It would be something worse, you wager?

What, tis the season of winter flus
so much to do
you caught me in my underwear
I do declare!

Well, I ought to get back in the sack
have got that knack!
don't come around for the germs
they'll make you squirm.

was it the season to be jolly?
I remember folly,
tis also the season of the dreaded flu
so much housework you reminded me to do.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-04-2002 01:00 PM).]

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N orth Carolina Girl
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1 posted 2002-01-04 12:22 PM


Martin,I have had the flu since before Christmas.It is one of the hardest things to shake.I hope you soon get better.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-01-04 12:26 PM


Hi Juanita,

I'm OK, just had a thought about those that were ill, hey my postings were also cut from everypoet, that's an infringement on my property!
Try echinacea it builds up your immune system




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-04-2002 01:01 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-01-04 12:53 PM


Awww... the flu bug got to the both of you too??? Hope you 2 get better, Juanita and Martin. I'm lying in bed with the bug as my companion. sad huh... =P

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-01-04 01:04 PM


Mon Cherie,

I remember this name from Moontown, nice to have you aboard too! well I get the game boards when I'm ill, even play scrabble with myself...one of the oldest and truest of boardgames yet, together with Monopoly.


peppermint35
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5 posted 2002-01-04 03:11 PM


Nothing worse than the flu bug.. a well-written and entertaining read.. if I had the flu.. it might be the best medicine

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

ecrivan
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6 posted 2002-01-04 04:29 PM


like a reason for a extra stay at home..I hear ya!!


Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-01-04 05:31 PM


A-CHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've ordered a dozen cartons of kleenex for you guys.
Hope you feel better soon.
Great poem, Martin.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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