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nichole2005
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0 posted 2002-01-04 11:39 AM


YOur love is like a river
It flows but never stops
You have your rocky times
But always get to the smooth parts
You change as you get further down
Never the same thing twice
Surprises around each corner

Your love is like the sun
It never stops burning
Without the sun
There would be no life
Sometimes it si brighter than other days

Now that you both have found eachother
The whole world stops
One look can change everything
Your hearts skip a beat
You know have found
That special someone!

© Copyright 2002 nichole2005 - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-04 11:41 AM


*sigh* oh yes, finding that someone special makes life seem so much more complete. Wonderful writing. I love this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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2 posted 2002-01-04 01:45 PM



This is very nice, thank you for sharing...

RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-01-04 06:09 PM


I like this a lot. There is someone special out there for each person! Best Wishes to you.

RP

walker
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4 posted 2002-01-04 06:30 PM


Lovely.
Suetang
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5 posted 2002-01-04 06:59 PM


Hello Nichole
Love can do many wonderful things to us and you have shown that so very clearly through your words which were much enjoyed.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-04 07:02 PM


This reminds me of a song, Young love, true love..lalalal, I dont know all the words. Nice poem. floria
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