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Cerenity
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0 posted 2002-01-04 10:15 AM



Mount of Emerald Green

As I sit upon my mount
a sea of emerald green
heart and soul I have given
to the only one who can save me.

With heart now open widely
looking towards the heavens
I give awe-inspiring thanks
for the blessing already found given
and those soon to be granted me.

Knowing in this place I reside
now in blessed tranquillity
is small in comparison
to the decaying world past
my tree line of emerald green.

Placing myself on mountains high
barricaded territories
would I see in front of me,
and military infested waters
keeping watch through storms wake
reaching far out to sea!

Just walking streets of my home land
can be traitorous as well,
for man seems to be on a collision course
withunseen forces seemingly in charge.

If you asked me what gives me
such peace and serenity
with cheerful glee I would convey
I have found true friendship
in one who loves me for me.

Find yourself that special little spot
maybe a mount of emerald green,
but if not don’t fret for it doesn’t matter
where or when simply ask it’s surprising
how much you will freely receive.


By Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



© Copyright 2002 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-04 11:23 AM


Hi, glad to see you again! I must say that this poem seems to have all the serentiy in it which I am lacking. Good thoughts here. I hope you stay positive like this.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-01-04 11:24 AM


Very nice, Ellen. God is truly a wonderful friend!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-04 11:30 AM


BRAVO!!!! I go to the mountains to find my place of serenity and let the peace fill me with visions. BRAVO!!!  I love this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2002-01-04 12:14 PM


SweetCerenity~
It's always sooooo nice to see you here~
This is just lovely ... lovely !

'Find yourself that special little spot
maybe a mount of emerald green,
but if not don’t fret for it doesn’t matter
where or when simply ask it’s surprising
how much you will freely receive.'


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2002-01-04 08:53 PM






(sigh) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet Ellen, your words always paint such lovely visions! (sigh) May you forever find true joy and tranquility and beauty in the mountains you see. (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-04 09:01 PM


As I sit upon my mount
a sea of emerald green
heart and soul I have given
to the only one who can save me.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lovely writing. True, HE is the one who gives so freely.

Deb

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