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Seymour Tabin
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Fluctuations

Those moments that mesmerize
Put me in a doldrums weak.
Transcend, simply hypnotize
Fuzzy pleasure to a peek

Sometimes, tightness in my throat
Others, skipping of my heart
Stays a feeling of emote
Recognition of an art

Happens in a poems rhyme
A statement, a picture line
Seems to play a trick on time
Pulls me in, in sense and sign.

Often brings a tear to lid
Or smile that leads to a wile
Fiercely livens up my ID
Opens up my memory file

In dreams I search that flame and
Those feelings of blameless blame


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Listening to every heart


1 posted 01-04-2002 08:34 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Methinks I'm not the only one shining around here...gads, Sy, this really likes me, so I'm going to just have to add it to my treasured trove...
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2 posted 01-04-2002 08:49 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This sounds pretty familiar, Sy... Haven't I heard it recently?...
Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine, Thank you sweet lady
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 01-04-2002 09:14 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan, Yes less the and ifs and buts
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                    Those moments that mesmerize
                    Put me in a doldrums weak.
                    Transcend, simply hypnotize
                    Fuzzy pleasure to a peek

                    Sometimes, tightness in my throat
                    Others, skipping of my heart
                    Stays a feeling of emote
                    Recognition of an art

                   Happens in a poems rhyme
                    A statement, a picture line
                    Seems to play a trick on time
                    Pulls me in, in sense and sign.

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Your fluxuations cause vibrations ... elation aligning with inspiration
A mystical mix of temptation ... laced with infatuation's fascination
Surrender is sweet salvation ...  imagination dances with anticpation
This collaboration of communication ... needs no expert explantion

Poetic levitations lead to ... rhymed reverie's revelations ...
An invitation born of admiration ... a poets way of expressing appreciation.


*winkiewinkie*
me
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6 posted 01-04-2002 09:20 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Seymour this is really lovely, I like this one muchly.

YOU do know it's extremely good don't you?

Well I hope so. Wonderful work absolutely wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 01-04-2002 09:24 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

JM,
I'm sure you triped over the dictionary this morning, let me kiss the boo-boo.
WW R S
Seymour Tabin
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Marsha,
And here is one for you too
Janet Marie
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9 posted 01-04-2002 09:50 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

ROFL.....
thank Ron for Rhyme Zone Dictionary....LOL
cuz its waaay to early to rhyme on my own...
I hadnt even had me tea    *L*
*ww*

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on the threshold of a dream


10 posted 01-04-2002 10:39 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much, Seymour... reading it gave much pleasure (though I'm not sure it's fuzzy. *G*)

A rhyming dictionary??? Where, oh where??? suthern starts a search... *G*
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11 posted 01-04-2002 06:03 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Sy...nicely done....very crafty poem...liked
this...
walker
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12 posted 01-04-2002 06:36 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

I lkie this, many emotions shown.
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 01-04-2002 07:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Suthern,
Maybe this will help

Magnus,
Thank you for the read and comment.

Walker,
and thank you for the read and reply
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So wonderful.

A
 
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