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Morning's Introduction
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Morning's Introduction |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Do you ever see The long marmalade fingers reach across the edge of the earth lilt with pink abandon the sun upon its pedestal deliberate yet majestic as it paints across your lover's face fluttering sleepy eyes awake towards your gaze always seeming to be the first time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Each sunrise is new dear somy~. It is good to see you again dear lady!! Much love and peace to you this year.  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful depiction of this. Much appreciated. Sandra |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
mornings seem virgin with experience to do the dawn perfect enjoyed it |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When it seems like the first time ... EVERY time ... you know the flame burns hot within  Wonderful write, Regina! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Do you ever see The long marmalade fingers reach across the edge of the earth lilt with pink abandon the sun upon its pedestal deliberate yet majestic ==================================== You just spread this one across us like melted butter on a cresent....  your imagery shines...your succinctity impresses. very very cool write of mornings "slow burn" *smile* another keeper...my collection of you grows jm |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, Yes mam, I have. But never could express it like you do! |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
'long marmalade fingers', reminds me of one of my favorite lines ever 'gash gold vermillion' - Gerard Manley Hopkins. beautiful thanks for the morning nudge. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very nicely rendered, Regina. I've missed you. *hugs* Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
A very well-described dawn! And'always seeming to be the first time' also seems to be a dawn in itself, as each sunrise brings forth a new day. The first of each day. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rwood - yes, always would it be the first time, every time... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I like the idea of looking for something fresh every morning, like how you broke up the meter but would tailor it here and there to get a better flow...this is just a thought as for eample the third to last stanza and the last might be adjusted so that the meters are closer.Very well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet Regina, your words always paint such heavenly visions! (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this had me dreaming ever so much of staring into my lovers eyes as the rosewood sunrise skies lathered upon us all. (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, Who would want to miss a moment like that! Luscious write. Thoroughly enjoyed. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Regina you are getting just too good at painting pictures for my heart to see! Absolutely stunning work. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Regina, Top of the morning to you...oh looks like you already had it. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Simply beautiful Regina. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds interesting...James |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Regina, This is so lovely I thought I'd send it up for another look so that others might have a chance to enjoy this piece. I hope you don't mind. My best to you, my friend. *hugs* Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beyond exquisite, I'm so glad I read this. Kathleen-- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* someday I will be able to watch just that....Your words make me yearn and hope that someday......well maybe someday...*grin* Beautiful..and filled with tenderness. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Donna: And to you dear somy! Much love. Sandra: Thank you sweet friend. OWG: Perfect dawn indeed! Thank you. Interloper: Yes..it does burn. Thank you dearly! Janet: My honor..you are awesome! Many hugs! Larry: So glad you know. It is a treasure. Thanks millions! Craigrk: I am honored to be compared to such a falcon of verse. So nice to meet you. Thank you. Michael: Miss you and everyone. Things will make it back to normal. Thank you friend! Mon Cherie: Yes one in one as one. Clever girl. Many hugs! Bill: Thank you for sharing with me that experience. Hugs! Ecrivan: Thank you very much. I too as a poet am very new..actually in many ways. So nice to meet you. Noah: "staring into my lovers eyes as the rosewood sunrise skies lathered upon us all" My dearest Noah..you are extraordinary in your youth of passion. Far beyond what you know. I am honored. Love and Hugs! Larry: Again my friend..you have me twice and I am so far behind. Thank you so much for being here. Mysteria: I hope so..you deserve anything and everthing beautiful for your heart. Love and hugs. Kethry: Every morning just like clockwork.  Sue: Hey simply wonderful lady! Thank you from the heart. James: It's....breathtaking. Hugs! Michael: Hugs. Hugs. Hugs. Kay: So glad you are here! Thank you my lady! Karen: My heart knows it will just for you. Someone beyond what you dream. Warm hugs! Gosh everyone..so glad to be back into the swing of the pen. I know I've missed so much. I missed you guys so much. Please know that I appreciate this wonderful place and I'll be digging in the back for a while. Much love and happiness. Many hugs to all. Sincerely, Regina |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Regina, you've described the moment perfectly...marmalade is the perfect imagery... |
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