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ctowen
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0 posted 2002-01-03 11:57 PM


Silent Whispers

Over the distance
through time and space
our last resistance ...
shared words of grace

Spoken soft and true
so light of heart
if only I knew
how whispers start

Time approaches near
my thoughts so ache
how to make you hear
this heart you sake

But each time I try
I loose my breath
unspoken words die
a silent death



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Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-04 12:03 PM


Hey, my friend......don't let those words go unspoken for too long...you may lose a treasure. I love the silent whispers of this one. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-01-04 12:20 PM


ctowen - this is just excellent. The rhymthm with it just flows beautifully, not a word out of place...

BC

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3 posted 2002-01-04 12:27 PM


They are spoken and soft and true....such as these whispers....beautiful.... hugs....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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4 posted 2002-01-04 05:52 AM




(sigh) Oh Craig, this is so very true, sometimes whispers are unknown of origin, and are never heard and it only brings silence to words. (sigh) May we all embrace each whisper with a smile and fel the beauty and tranquility through verse! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo meaningful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana
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5 posted 2002-01-05 11:18 AM


enjoy
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6 posted 2002-01-05 05:12 PM


ctowen,


    I think I have been missing your posts This is the first time I've seen you in awhile.  Your writing always has such and effect on me... I love your poems. Thank you for sharing.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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