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Passions at Daybreak....
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Passions at Daybreak.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Till the end of this moment, I will... Till my last drop falls, I will... Till a breath no longer escapes...I won’t For...till all is done...I am here..for you. I see your eyes, the glimmer of love... Your face, the beacon that calls me. Your voice, the whisper that caresses. You...all of you...all that I want or need. Each moment with you feels so short. Each moment away an agony of eternity. Living for each moment, I await you. Your moments become ours, we are one. Give me your most tender, tasteful kiss. Let me drink of your wine that flows. Taste mine own as our lips are joined. You quench my thirst, kindle my desire. Flames burn hot within my aching mind. The fires of passion shall not dim tonight. Smouldering coals of love reflecting. The warmth of you...I hold in my arms. If you were here...I would ravage you as sighs of joy escape both our lips. Our shudders would become a quake as a moment of ecstacy overwhelms us. I shall await your waking moment. For within your sleep...love flourishes. Our bodies joined in our minds together wait for the rise of the sun, our passions. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Flames burn hot within my aching mind. The fires of passion shall not dim tonight. Smouldering coals of love reflecting. The warmth of you...I hold in my arms. This is what true love is! You're a lucky man, Magnus. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I agree with Duncan and so is she! My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Nothing like love is there. nice write. great expression. floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
If you were here...I would ravage you as sighs of joy escape both our lips. Our shudders would become a quake as a moment of ecstacy overwhelms us. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ SIGH ALERT!!! MAJOR SIGHS HAPPENING UP NORTH! *smile* Great write Barry! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Duncan, YEP...thanx much for the reply... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...thank you...She still puts up with me. That says something...And reads some of this. Sits with her jaw slack...sometimes misty eyed...wondering where this romantic man came from. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may these eternal passions forever burn brightly in your heart and fill your heart with true loves happiness forever as the hidden sun will always rise and set in loves eyes! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Floria...this is what I enjoy doing...Just a part of my expression...Thank You. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh wow...Nancy....now you have gone and done it again....Thanx...happy to see major sighs from way up yonder... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Mr "M": Now you are cranking them out, real scorchers and I was waiting. Didn't take you too long. You are sooooooooooo romantic. Thanks for sharing. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ariana...yep...but I have slowed down a little these last few weeks... I am happy that you do very much enjoy these poems of love... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sigh~ This is a wonderful passionate write... Took my breath away at some moments.... thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You MyEnchanted....I don't guess I will ever remember first names very well. I always remember the comments...but I am horrible about the names...I apologize... Just part of getting older... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...as always...you never fail...Thank you.. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Absolutely breathtaking.. I agree!!!  Pepper |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Smouldering passion in this poem. Passion flows like a raging river in its words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ *grinning* here ... 'Passions At Daybreak' could' easily have been the title of mine~  'You quench my thirst, kindle my desire.' Oh yes ! I think perhaps we sip from the same cup of happiness~ Here's a toast to you and yours~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
Magnus, Oh Wow..breathtaking..it is one I would love to share with someone special...magnificent writing...you say it all! VR |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!Sizzling at daybreak. Hot one here......that brings all the ladies of passions out sighing. BRAVO!!! Now Barry, about that clone... Too cute. I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
a trully well constructed write |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
Beauty and, above all, Love abounds in your words. -heather |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pepper...happy that you enjoyed..Thanx... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy Rose...thank you...that is exactly the way I wanted it to read.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, I always enjoy your thoughts... Yes, we could drink from the same cup... Thank You.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this not one, but several ways, and I thank you for lending such lines... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Virgo...pleases me much when I see words like those you have expressed...thank you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...Gosh....I am sorry to report that the clone you requested has been stolen. Another one is being formulated as we write. A heavy dose of romance and soft words are being loaded into the mind... Should be there by this time next week... Please be patient.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ghostwriter_6, Thank You very much...Just something that I enjoy doing.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Heather, thank you very much. Happy you enjoyed the poem.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kari, I want you to know that I always enjoy your critique of my words...You are very perceptive and know much of feelings and thoughts.... Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
passions indeed, very nice |
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