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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-01-03 07:04 PM

In Want Of You
~*Marge Tindal*~

In soft awakening
I feel the silken breath of you
move across bare skin
Teasing with pleasing,
arousal from deep within
Come into my morning, dear
Take this love I have for sharing
Foreverly in want of you
Foreverly in arduous caring

Tattle-tale shivers give me away
as I come in greet of the morn
I love the awakening of you in my day
within your arms of new-day adorn

Subtle sighs of satisfaction linger long
quilted cozy in the all of you
after the sun has sung its' song
Awaken again the day in me …
for I love being loved by you~

*Thank you, tweetie-pie~
P u r r r r r r r r r~
January 2, 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-01-03 07:27 PM

Marge...I find it hard to believe that no
one has commented on this yet...for it is
a beautiful poem of love and romance...

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2002-01-03 08:26 PM

My, my, my - this is sweet and passionate!

Cor

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-03 08:28 PM

Very tender and romantic. floria

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-01-03 08:34 PM

Oh wow, Marge! You are full of romantic poems. This as another beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with me.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-03 08:44 PM

Tattle-tale shivers give me away
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Marge...this is my favourite line...
well, one of my favourite lines!
You sure sound 'in love' woman!!
And I for one am so happy for you!
Enjoyed so much, Nancy.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2002-01-03 09:14 PM

Ahh, Little Goose, it does me good to see you so happy...very gentle smile

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-01-03 09:23 PM

Nice and sensual Marge...James

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-01-03 09:52 PM

Mm, there is that "foreverly" again. I think you are far too happy..

What a miracle love can be.
Sandra

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-01-03 09:57 PM

Margie girl darling sister of my heart

I love this one utterly utterly love it.

ITS SOOOOOOOO YOU, sensual and sooooooo tender. Well done darling girl. I love the way you wear love it's so becoming.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

10 posted 2002-01-03 10:32 PM

Wow.. this took my breath!!! Wonderful work, as per your usual !!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2002-01-03 10:42 PM

Magnus~
If it received no other reply ...
knowing you enjoyed it would be more than enough~
Thank you always for the sweet replies~

Corinne~
Thanks, sweetie~

Strbbux~
Thank you very much~

SmartChick~
Ahhhhh, Sue ... I love sharing with you~
Thanks so much~

Enchantress~
How'd you do that ???
Mine too~ Thanks gal~

Logan~

JamesMichael~
Thanks bunches~

CatalinaMoon~
Yes ... foreverly ... is the perfect phrase for how we feel~
Can't be 'too happy' ... but ... I'll try~

MarshaLove~
*Hugs* to you dear girl~
Sister of my soul .. I love ya'~

PepperMint~
Thank you sooooo much~
It's so good to see you~
~*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

12 posted 2002-01-03 10:51 PM

this one suits you

-- very soft and tender

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

13 posted 2002-01-03 11:09 PM

Marge...A wonderful love song to the one you adore. Unique wording gives this poem a beautiful texture, exquisite points of starlight beauty. ***Ivy Rose

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

14 posted 2002-01-03 11:41 PM

Hi Marge,

Beautifully romantic, you really have a gift for writing my pritty, it's always so uplifting and delightful to read your poetry, thanks so for sharing your heart.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

15 posted 2002-01-03 11:48 PM

*grin* I love it when you do foreverly...this is a wonderful romantic poem. Therefore I love it....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2002-01-03 11:51 PM

Marge - this is good, very good, sensual, loving, soft. Yummy!!!!

BC

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2002-01-04 12:00 PM

Jamie~
Thank you so much.
It's so nice to see you~

IvyRose~
Yes ... it is to the man who sets my heart to singing~
Thank you very much~

Cerenity~
I love seeing you here~
Thanks for stopping by .. come more often, okay ?

StarTime~
*grinning* right back~
Me too~ ... thanks, gal~

BillCharles~
Thanks for seeing 'Yummy !!!!' in it~
It was and is ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

18 posted 2002-01-04 12:05 PM

Hey Marge...does what's his name know about this? LOL Smitten to the bone!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

19 posted 2002-01-04 12:18 PM

HeyLarry~
'what's his name' ... not only inspired it ..
he got to enjoy it as much as I did !!!!
Tee-Hee ... 'smitten' is about as correct as you'll ever be~
*BIG GRINS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

20 posted 2002-01-04 09:43 AM

Yanno... I'd really have to scold you severely if I wasn't so happy for you... one-sided want just doesn't measure up and this shade of green I've turned is most unbecoming! LOL

I can be happy for your joy AND jealous, can't I? *G*

I like this sensual beauty, Marge... very much.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

21 posted 2002-01-04 09:51 AM

"Tatteletale shivers"
I love it!
Wonderfully sensual and expressive piece. You constantly amaze me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

22 posted 2002-01-04 10:04 AM

SweetSuthernGal~
I'm not too fond
of your shade of green
It really just doesn't seem
that you should wear it today
when happiness is just a heartbeat away~

I just LOVE you gal~

InterLoper~
*grinning like the proverbial Cheshire Cat here*
I hope to always amaze you~

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

23 posted 2002-01-05 04:09 AM

Marge, what can I say but

Itis so beautiful to see you in love.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

24 posted 2002-01-05 06:55 AM

Marge,
you little hottie you. Now I am sweating and breathless.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

25 posted 2002-01-05 07:55 AM

Oh Marge, I remember the first rush of love and how it hangs on so sweetly. Lovely.
Dee

Ooooooops!

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

[This message has been edited by Dee (01-05-2002 05:10 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

26 posted 2002-01-05 08:00 AM

Marge,

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

27 posted 2002-01-05 08:43 AM

Oh WOW, deeply in love, I can see that.

You deserve it sweet princess, enjoy!

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

28 posted 2002-01-05 09:48 AM

BEAUTIFUL
I SAW A POST ABOUT NUPTUALS.....IS IT TRUE
PLEASE E-MAIL ME, I'M SO ANXIOUS TO KNOW....DETAILS AND ALL
MAN, I'VE MISSED YOU ALL ON HERE

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

29 posted 2002-01-05 10:01 AM

Dee~
Thank you so much ... twice ! !
It's beautiful to be there ! And it IS WONDERFUL~

Kethry~
Tee-Hee~ .... 'Me too~

Seymour~
Right back at ya', babe~

Titia~
I thank YOU sooooooooo much, sweetie~

HootieGal~
YES ! IT's TRUE ! !
Check your e-mail for details and photo~
Love to all~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~ & Bill~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

30 posted 2002-01-06 02:04 AM

as always, beautiful!

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

31 posted 2002-01-06 12:49 PM

breathtaking beauty...the romance..passion and contentment dance..

Shelly

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

32 posted 2002-01-11 01:19 AM

Marge-
   Well, sweet friend...I've said it before
   and I'll say it again.  Love looks VERY
   good on you!    I'm so glad you've found
   someone who makes you so happy.
   And, now...I must go find MINE! LOL!
   Loving this little touch of 'wanting'.
   Love you soooooo much,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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