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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-09 06:40 AM



Magnetic poetry (Serenity’s challenge)

                          

                                    Then Smile
remember that the world
is not strong
laugh away
this dark music
celebrate a dream
of trust
explore another hunger
through worship
ask
for passions pleasures
come share burn
between touch
embrace a candle song
a gentle angel’s dance
feel love
then smile

"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-01-09 06:58 AM


Hey you...(yeah...I'm still up..)

This was a delightful surprise. You managed to lift the light out from the shadows, and it was just what the doctor ordered this morning! Thank you.

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
2 posted 2002-01-09 08:47 AM


nice uplifting poem you have managed to create. well done

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-01-09 09:43 AM


1Slick Lady,
suitably smiling here! Is that ok?
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Irish Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-09 08:03 PM



"candle song"  Oh this is magic!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

walker
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5 posted 2002-01-09 08:25 PM


Lovely.
Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-09 08:39 PM


*sigh* "embrace a candle song" How incredibly beautiful. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2002-01-09 09:23 PM


1slick_lady - tender, as only you do...

BC
  

DonFurr
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8 posted 2002-01-13 08:06 PM


Memories of what was once and dreams of things still to be done. What completeness of thought. Everyone can learn from you. Dear Lady I bow to you yet again.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-01-13 09:32 PM


Embrace a candle song...Helen, I love this!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Sven
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10 posted 2002-01-13 11:39 PM


words spoken in another voice. . .

you've found it helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-01-14 03:10 PM




(sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...a gentle angel's dance, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) This is such a beautiful challenge, sweet friend, I just love how you express such beauty! We all love you so much, sweet friend, so gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

kaile
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12 posted 2002-01-16 07:31 PM


explore another hunger
through worship

i liked these lines best..despite advancements in technology, we still turn to religion for solace...you expressed this void very well...

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
13 posted 2002-01-16 07:40 PM


Just Beautiful!  I definitely feel love, it's the core of me - I do smile...all the time, almost -  to the chargrin of some...

jwesley

Silver Streak
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14 posted 2002-01-16 07:44 PM


Thanks for your candle of light!
-Silver Streak

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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