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arthur
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0 posted 2002-01-03 12:07 PM



   Go to the shorewhere the sea laps bright.
   Wait by the rock for the end of night.
   Look East for that first coil of light.

   Before things of day are yet to be
   Yet night has quitely slipped away
   Be still now:And think of me

          Arthur  
        

© Copyright 2002 michael bennett - All Rights Reserved
Gothkitty
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1 posted 2002-01-03 12:09 PM


Very nice a pleasure to read
Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-03 12:15 PM


*sigh* simply beautiful. **big hugs** Gentle romance fills these words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

whiskey
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3 posted 2002-01-03 12:18 PM


Lovely I enjoyed it alot, very romantic


Julie

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4 posted 2002-01-03 12:18 PM



A quiet entreaty...easy
enough to follow.  I belive
I will...

dgvarner
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5 posted 2002-01-03 12:26 PM


very cool...enjoyed..!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is that dance we do in the space between 'making it happen' & 'letting it happen'"  marci

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-03 03:27 PM


This moved me greatly for some odd reason...

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-01-03 03:47 PM


Michael, you conjured up an image in my mind of a woman sitting quite alone on this rock, looking out to the sea...hoping, waiting patiently.  I really enjoyed this one.  One of your best yet, in my opinion.  
Write on love.
Hugs across the pond, Nancy

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Hypnosis
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8 posted 2002-01-03 05:34 PM


This was very beautifully written.  It was also very romantic, I couldn'y think of anyone who could resist!

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2002-01-03 05:52 PM


Well writeen, indeed. It painted a very nice word picture for me
vandana
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10 posted 2002-01-03 06:31 PM


enjoy
Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-01-03 08:28 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the lighthouse of your heart reflect to the love of your life and lead her to your heart forever with loves bliss! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet arthur, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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