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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-03 11:43 AM



fish swimming upstream
pure instinct the driving force
the eggs shall be laid


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (01-03-2002 01:02 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-03 11:48 AM


This makes me think of salmon and their struggle to get upstream. BRAVO!!! I love the vision I saw from this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

arthur
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2 posted 2002-01-03 12:02 PM


we , and they, are driven by the most basic of needs
arthur

Soleil Noir
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3 posted 2002-01-03 12:11 PM



My mind thought "born" instead
of "bare"...but both work...

Thank you.

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with you
4 posted 2002-01-03 01:02 PM


makes me want to go fishing
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5 posted 2002-01-03 01:11 PM


Haiku is great for the head as was this one. thanks.
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6 posted 2002-01-03 07:40 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words paint beautiful images of nature! (smiles) May these fish forever spawn and bring new life to all the waters! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-01-03 08:19 PM


Good one Interloper...did I tell you I love these?  
Oh...okay.  
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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8 posted 2002-01-03 08:23 PM


Oh, nice haiku, makes me want to do one again. it's been awhile. floria
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