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vandana
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0 posted 2002-01-03 11:38 AM



I wanted to tell you earlier
than this
Guess,
It Is too late now,
Now I realise that
you are my true love,
and need you
each day,
you said you loved me,
now,
Today was the day,
When you left me alone,
the day you left me,
I can't let
the memories go,
Each way,
I do It for you,
but It seems
I keep dreaming of you
day and night,
I can't let It go,
can't let you go
of my mind,
I keep thinking,
Wished you
can't let It go,
No, no,
memories of you and me
memories of sharing true love,
dreaming of you and me,
Can't let It go of you,
Can't let It go,
I try to let It go,
But can't let It go,
Can't let it go....

© Copyright 2002 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-01-03 11:41 AM


Sometimes letting go is so hard to do.
Sometimes we have to wether we wish to our not.  You write the pain well.  Nice Write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-01-03 11:44 AM


It takes time

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-03 11:45 AM


*sigh* such pain and loss....my heart goes out to you.....**big hugs** I pray that you find the strength to let go so that you can move on.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

arthur
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4 posted 2002-01-03 11:54 AM


we have all been there
(yes even me)
Once in a life time is enough
arthur

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5 posted 2002-01-03 07:25 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Vandana, my heart goes out to you and your tears, I too know how hard it feels to let go, but I know deep down with all my heart true love will find a way and fill your heart with joy and comfort to surmount this pain. (kiss on cheek) All our hearts go out to you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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