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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-01-03 12:08 PM



My Sweet One,

hear the sultry strains
of my spirit flute...

mellow notes floating
~~~~on sound waves
right into your heart.
My love is a new melody
sung with unending yearning.
O', Fair One, I play
the notes of my soul. They
are yours to keep forever.
Forever is too short, infinity
~~~~not long enough.
My spirit flute will breath
the same love song...unending.
It will be an unseen hand
to caress your yearning spirit,
~~~~an eternal arm
to rest upon the shoulder
~~~~of your need.

Hear the sensous strains
of the spirit flute, My Love...

They are carried within
the notes of my own heart,
~~~~~~my own soul.



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Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-03 12:57 PM


Ivy...this poem is fantastic....I could hear the echoe of a flute carried on the winds. Stunning. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-01-03 01:35 AM


Forever is too short, infinity
~~~~not long enough.

What a great line! A very well played tune, Ivy Rose.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-03 02:14 AM


I love a sound of the flute!  Wow, Ivy, you have captured my attention with this one!

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2002-01-03 07:16 AM


A beautifully melodic verse Ivy Rose ... lovely sentiments indeed, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2002-01-03 07:03 PM




(sigh) Oooooohhhhhh....the Love Flute...I love it, the beauty of spiritual love fills your words, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) The magic of courtship strums in your melody of your heart, sweet friend, soooooooo romantic! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-03 07:08 PM


IvyRose~
This is as lovely as the true 'song of the wood' ...
Thanks so much for a lovely read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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strbbux
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7 posted 2002-01-03 08:34 PM


Oh how I love the flute. lovely poem. floria
Kethry
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8 posted 2002-01-04 06:27 AM


Ivy,
you have captured the song of the flute in this romantic melody.
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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