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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-01-03 12:07 PM


Your love is like a symphony
Playing music to my heart
Even though there is much distance
Keeping you and I apart

The distance becomes irrelevant
As my heart calls out to you
How it overflows with joy
Whenever you come into view

My dreams bring you right beside me
In my dreams we're never apart
As I count the amount of steps it takes
To reach your warm and loving heart

The pinnacles of passion we climb
With such ease we reach its peak
How entranced am I looking into your eyes
As my knees suddenly feel so weak

Your love is surely a gift
That has been bestowed upon me
How you warm my aching heart
And set my spirit free

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-01-03 12:11 PM


Sue,
2002 and it just keeps getting better. Wonderful write Sue.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2002-01-03 12:28 PM


Ones spirit is meant to be set free ...
and such words are more than music any
orchestra could ever play.
Excellent piece ... simply beautiful.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2002-01-03 12:40 PM


Your love sings of the passion that you share. Absolutely beautiful. A sensual delight to read. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-01-03 07:00 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet Sue, you are soooooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) May you forever stand happily on the pinnacles of passion with cheer and loving smiles and hope! We all love you so much, sweet Sue, love sings in your heart like music! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
5 posted 2002-01-03 10:35 PM


Very nicely done, Sue, it reaches out to you, loved the read...very gentle smile
peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
6 posted 2002-01-03 10:39 PM


I really enjoyed reading this.. it is true!!! Distance does not matter as long as the connection is truly there..

Your words are music to my heart

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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