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Open Poetry #18

Caramel Kisses (Tanka)

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-01-02 03:59 PM

Smooth caramel lips
Meet mine for a sugar fix
Dreamy indulgence
Your velvet touch on my cheek
Caramel kisses so sweet

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-02 04:02 PM

Has Noah read this yet! Ha ha, this is delightful!!!!!!!!!

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-01-02 04:06 PM

Thank you sweetheart...Noah will like it when he sees...he inspires me A LOT, ya know!

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

3 posted 2002-01-02 04:16 PM

Rose Petal - Very nice and sweet, no pun intended.

Dave

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-02 04:25 PM

oooooooo I love caramel...this is a very tasty treat. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

5 posted 2002-01-02 05:51 PM

Oh Joanna this is so romantic for your sweet Noah.  It looks like you have a very lucky guy and vice versa.  I'm glad you two are so happy with each other!

    From your friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

6 posted 2002-01-02 06:53 PM

Loved it. tanka is good for the head isn't it... and the lips. thanks, you've inspired me.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-02 07:11 PM

Mmmmmmmmmmm...I dream ever so much of smothering your sweet lips with kisses everyday...nice sweet caramel ones! (kisses on lips) I love you, sweet friemd, I love you, I love you, I love you! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-02 07:31 PM

Rose petal how sweet this is and you chose caramel, my favorite. nice write. floria

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