Open Poetry #18 |
dry salt bed |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
the eyes of you view whole of me colored spin duplicity dancing in an angel's wing... confetti dust-- a falling of the things that must pass away and drift on air... A question lingers: "Was it there?" "Say you did not feel it too." Yes, say my heart beat all alone-- each lie you speak I will condone. Let me hear your knock on door, a-trembling with shaking knees-- I need the satin of "some more..." Dry salt bed of tears uncried. There are memories that die without a eulogy of lies. just one more night. Watch the moon-- watch her delight... she, the shadow of the light, pulling waves of sea as sigh. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I love the way you have pondered the questions and circumstance in this Serenity ... questioning whether your feelings were reciprocated, yet wanting more, no matter the response. Very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tis a wistful poem missy!! I think I have a dry salt bed of tears too..that was a great image! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, There is loneliness inside. Dry salt bed of tears uncried. Doesn't get better than that. *L* Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is loneliness inside. Dry salt bed of tears uncried. There are memories that die without a eulogy of lies. But dance with me, just one more night. Watch the moon-- watch her delight... she, the shadow of the light, pulling waves of sea as sigh. ================================================ oh baby....dont we know.... from your pen to my mirror me twin ... anyone ever tell ya your rhymes are divine I ask why you come here, you say just because |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This one goes in my library, it went right through me. Here I am on here again oh jeez, I'm trying....just a few poems and then gosh, it is so lovely outside, snow and all, how can I resist going out and freezing I like this a lot. Kathleen-- |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
amazing what we are willing to settle for at weak moments... This poem is awesome, serene one |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
There is loneliness inside. Dry salt bed of tears uncried. There are memories that die without a eulogy of lies. Another very good write. Kit definitely summed this write up very well. Nicely done. Dave |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - you do write some beautiful poetry. But dance with me, just one more night. Watch the moon-- watch her delight... she, the shadow of the light, pulling waves of sea as sigh. Dance I will, but not for one... In a moonbeam, my delight... Shadows two, in the twilight, embracing waves, whisper your sigh... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all for your kind replies and patience. (I think I actually LIKE this one, lol--a rare thing for me.) As always I appreciate you all taking the time to read. |
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