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Open Poetry #18

At one minute to midnight

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-02 09:53 AM

Part of me
wants to love you
Part of me is afraid
Part of me is ready
Part of me is not
And at one minute to
midnight
my heart calls out
your name
It's a lonely world
without you
I need you
to me part of me
to feel complete

[This message has been edited by walker (01-02-2002 09:54 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-01-02 10:01 AM

Walker~

'at one minute to
midnight
my heart calls out
your name'

Ohhhhhhh, I 'know' this feeling~
Wonderfully done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-02 12:08 PM

Oh my gosh.....such emotion that calls from our your heart. I could feel it. Wonderful writing. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-02 12:12 PM

So much said in a few words. nice, floria

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2002-01-02 12:22 PM

and at one minute after....
nice emotive writing-- enjoyed

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-02 09:52 PM

(sigh) Such yearning fills these words, sweet friend, I hope now you have true love to hold close forever and ever that is timeless in beauty! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-01-02 09:55 PM

With all those parts you're still not complete? Just messin' with ya, walker. I know exactly what you mean. Good write!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-02 10:03 PM

And at one minute to
midnight
my heart calls out
your name
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh how I love this....wonderful walker!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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