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cpalmer
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0 posted 2002-01-02 01:18 AM


                            
                                              W
                                            o   n
                                           d      r
                                          o          u
                                        s  leaves of
                                       changing color           send
                      all            feelings  array.        happiness
                    fills            my  s o u l   to        watch God's
                painting        portray ....The          privilege   of
               this great     scene  That only        God  provides
              We  take      for granted every        year, and  live
             out   our        daily  lives.  Take        this scene with
            pure   amazement,       the    b e a u t y  all    around
            for   soon   it   will   die    with   coming  snow…….and
            lose that  h e a v e n l y  sound........A   life  that  only
             comes with fall.….the last  word  of  nature  speaks
             fire  shown  i n   sunlight, wind  rustling like a creek
              The  m e l o d i c  sounds God  has spoken,  comes
               Through so  clearly now……..The  hands  of  God
                  have  touched us…………………While  the  trees
                    of  color bow……………..Look  around  at  the
                      b e a u t y   He  gives……..Live  each  day
                         for Him…………..Watch a s  He  speaks
                              o f  L o v e  a n d   P e a c e  i n
                                  t h e   n a t u r a l   w o r l d
                                                          w
                                                           i
                                                            t
                                                             h
                                                               i
                                                                n
Cpalmer



God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-01-02 01:26 AM


Cindi,
There you are. I love the beauty of this poem in both the layout and the content. Classy as I would expect from you.

cpalmer
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2 posted 2002-01-02 01:32 AM


Larry,
You are such a sweetie!  Thanks so much...I've missed being here...good to see you too!
Love ya
Cindi

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3 posted 2002-01-02 09:11 AM


Hi,good to see you again. This is very cool, love the format. And writing.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-01-02 09:48 AM


Oh,Cindi~
THIS IS GORGEOUS~
What a lovely, lovely presentation of words of faith~
So good to see you 'grow' in your poetry~

Girl ... this is GOOD !  Really, really GOOD~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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strbbux
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5 posted 2002-01-02 12:45 PM


C this is great, how patient you are to create this. I love it. floria
cpalmer
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6 posted 2002-01-02 01:19 PM


Sandra,
Thanks, it's good to be back!   Glad you like it!
Hugs
Cindi

Marge,
Thank you, it means so much to me to hear you say that! I have a very special friend who inspired these words when he described the fall leaves to me....I must give him some of the credit...I had never quite seen autumn in this way till then!  Thanks again for your kind words!
Love ya
Cindi

Floria
Thank you...it did take alot of time but it has been rewarding to see the final outcome...glad you like it!
Hugs
Cindi


Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-02 01:42 PM


WOW!!!!BEAUTIFUL...STUNNING.....OH GOSH I LOVE IT.....AND NOT BECAUSE I AM PARTIAL TO THIS KIND OF SHAPE POEM.....I LOVE THE WAY YOU BROUGHT IT ALL TOGETHER......MAGNIFICENT. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

cpalmer
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8 posted 2002-01-02 04:25 PM


Startime,
Thanks so much!   I'm so glad you liked it!  I don't know what else to say but thanks!
Hugs
Cindi

[This message has been edited by cpalmer (01-02-2002 04:32 PM).]

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2002-01-03 07:03 PM


Hey Cindy, missed you sweet girl, where've you been?????

This is just lovely, glad to see you posting again.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

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10 posted 2002-01-03 08:26 PM




STANDING OVATION!!! BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO GORGEOUS, SWEET CINDY, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE THE SHAPE AND MESSAGE, MAY WE ALL CHERISH THE BEAUTY OF GOD AND LOVE AND HOLD IT TRUE TO OUR LOVING HEARTS!!! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cindy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2002-01-03 08:33 PM


This is beautiful in words and presentation!
Enjoyed so much!!  ~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2002-01-03 09:12 PM


It is good to see you again Cindi.  This poem is beautiful, filled with God's beauty through your words.  Peace this new year to you.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Kethry
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13 posted 2002-01-04 06:01 AM


Cindi,
This is a soft and beautiful as a falling autumn leaf. Lovely!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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