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Kevin
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0 posted 2002-01-01 11:13 PM


Love knows no patience
Seven-thirty
Eight-thirty
Why must time without you fail in comparison?
The same memories repeat
Flashes of smiles
Dangling curls
Laughter
God I love the way you laugh
Billy says you can't hurry love
My heart is racing
Nine-thirty
RINGING!
(yes, hold on I'll go get him for you)
Ten-thirty
Thirty-one
Thirty-two
Yes mom,
No nothings wrong,
NOTHINGS WRONG,
I’m going to bed
Hey...if anyone calls?
Nevermind, I'll be up
Love knows no patience

© Copyright 2002 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2002-01-01 11:17 PM


Yes, I remember this impatience of waiting for the phone to ring. Question though...why didn’t you call her??? We women are funny that way, we like the guy to be the one calling us!! I like this Kevin

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (01-01-2002 11:17 PM).]

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-01 11:17 PM


*giggling* well done.....A wonderful start to the new year. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-01-01 11:17 PM


the uncertainty of it all---lol
enjoyed reading this

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4 posted 2002-01-02 12:57 PM


this is certainly a new way to express love's impatience and very appropriate...oh how the telephone can be a important intermediate!Nicely done. Happy New Year


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5 posted 2002-01-02 09:58 AM


SweetKevin~

'The same memories repeat
Flashes of smiles
Dangling curls
Laughter
God I love the way you laugh
Billy says you can't hurry love
My heart is racing'


I just love the anticipation in this~
Very, very nicely done, cutie pie~

Happy New Year to you dear poet~
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2002-01-02 12:44 PM


Oh Kevin you make me yearn to be young again. floria
Larry C
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7 posted 2002-01-02 01:10 PM


Kevin,
You have been smitten...for sure! Love it.

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