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Beneath A Twilight Sky
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Beneath A Twilight Sky |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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As I was driving home one evening I saw the sky turning many colors As the sun disappeared into the night The sky turned orange as the sun left Colors of pink and blue I saw too It was such a beautiful sight to see My passion growing stronger within As I thought about the love we share Holding each other in loving arms Feeling the warmth from within you As we lay there close to each other It was a night I wish would never end Lying here underneath a twilight sky Enjoying every single moment with you Feeling your gentle touch on my skin Sends great desire all the way through As you hold me so close to your heart While we ly here beneath a twilight sky © By Sue 1-1-02 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so very romantic...there is nothing like a twilight sky that seems made for two lovers to express the passions that burn in their hearts. BRAVO!!! I love this poem, it's feel and vision. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
as startime said--there are few things more romantic than a beautiful sunset--- lovely poem There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And may you have a Happy New Year with many twilight nights like this. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet Sue, this is sheer romance at its best! (kiss on cheek) May you forever share each sunrise and sunset with the love of your life in happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Colors and love are so intermingled aren't they? I love writing about color also and the images one can relate to the person reading. I did enjoy this. 'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue....full of lovely imagery and very lyrical. Enjoyed, Nancy ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmartChick~ SweetSue ... you nailed it, babe~ In this twi-of-light sky ... I 'felt' the vivid warmth of the colors~ Perfectly done ... you let it flow and the passionate colors blended into a lovely, lovely piece~ Way to go, gal~ Love ya', my friend~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - loved the title to this, just great. And I loved the poem, warm feelings it gave... BC |
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