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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-01-01 07:41 PM



The Tryst

Come the assignation,
Secret rendevous
Dwell here a small while
In the gloom
Consult thy heart
See that there is room
For only one,
My one,
Love

In this tryst
Of hearts, never
Part, ever
Beloved

The flower plucked
To scent thy bed
Give heady thy
Fragrance light
Throughout this
Our night

Adoring delight

Untress my hair
Let it lay cross
Your chest
Sit with me at
Foot of brier
Let thy love lift
To the higher
Element

And be then
Heaven
Sent



12.27.00
revised 01.01.02



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
1 posted 2002-01-01 07:51 PM


Beautiful words, beautiful scene.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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2 posted 2002-01-01 07:57 PM


Sensually beautiful. Filling the senses with tender passion. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

thepoeticplumber
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 185

3 posted 2002-01-01 08:03 PM


Oh how love words can express when arranged so.  You have delighted the spirit of amour.
I beleive that is the correct french spelling of love.  Well!  I hope so.  Great writing Sunshine.  Roger


Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
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4 posted 2002-01-01 08:13 PM


Ahh, Sissie..well..this is wonderful..are you SURE you don't need a talk with your bro?..very gentle smile
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-01-01 08:20 PM


Ooooh Karilea, such subtle sensuality here...and I just love it!  
Ever so delicately penned and enjoyed.
*I am sure had I opened my mouth after reading this,
an audible low moan would have escaped, lol*
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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