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OWG
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first morning 02
wore orange
over lavender
long sleeves

neon tin foil
painted by gypsies
eucalyptus mouthwash breath
from winding with the trees

she danced still dances
slow moving her clouds aside
leaning over shoulders
with warm hand whispers

she spoke of long legged yellow
round noon
just for the riders
in leather

said she preferred them
how they always watched her
in the mornings
and she loved

their thunder...

OWG 2002
© Copyright 2002 OWG - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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1 posted 01-01-2002 05:23 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

enjoyed your nice sunny day-- may  you have many more.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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Hurricane Alley


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Sounds lovely...I'm glad you had a nice day for riding! I'd like to know what you think about when you ride? Have you ever written about that?
Startime
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Thank you for taking me on the ride with you. It was beautiful. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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a biker's early morning...what a scene...

well done!
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with you


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you can't beat the sound a Harley makes....I always look....and smile
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Very well done!  Enjoyed much!  Hugs, Nancy

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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now, this one really spoke to me!

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

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8 posted 01-01-2002 11:41 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

she danced still dances
slow moving her clouds aside
leaning over shoulders
with warm hand whispers"

well now, Happy New Year....I love your paintings.....still riding the BB?? I am sure you are...be well be safe.....Peace


Greeneyes~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-01-2002 11:42 PM).]

ecrivan
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I guess you like biking, although de Vine suggested riding, anyway hope your day was a
nice one! Happy New Year

OWG
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Thanks to you all...you make this visit a warm expereince..

with regards OWG
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By the Seaside


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Just as pretty as a picture!
Not you silly, I'm talking about your poem.

You do take some nice shots OWG.

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Still smiling...
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