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The Stars Sing In Your Eyes
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The Stars Sing In Your Eyes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
The Stars Sing In Your Eyes By: Noah Eaton 1/1/02 When I caress your creamy face Ribboned in leather and lace Tinges of starlight cascade in your tears And I fall in love all over again with you, my dear The stars sing in your eyes, sweet darling Pearls of Jupiter worn like a queen I will be your glass blowing romeo Polishing your tears into gems love will behold Our hearts will sing with loves destiny I will kiss you in romantic royalty We'll share these stars as a reminder To a home of eternal love we'll share together Spread your wings to me, my dove We shall embrace the ivory skies of love Reaching out into the abode of celestial pleasure Forever staring into your starry eyes of rare loves treasure [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-01-2002 03:55 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awww you are so romantic, my sweet prince! I love all of your poems, they light up my life. love, RP |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
"Our hearts will sing with loves destiny I will kiss you in romantic royalty We'll share these stars as a reminder To a home of eternal love we'll share together" This stanza gave me goosebumps..you are so wonderfully thoughtful. Hope she sees this one!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - what sweet words from your pen. Anyone that reads these has to be touched by you.. BC |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
This is beautiful Noah! Good Job! It's so romantic. Happy New Year! Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is so sweet, so romantic and so very beautiful noah, floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This poem weaves such a tender vision, Noah...I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautifully romantic vision, Noah. Happy New Year!    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So romantically, adorably sweet!!!! Quite nice!!!!! Write more dear poet!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Noah, you always write the sweetest, dreamiest love poems...and it's good to see you use a rhyme scheme in this, it works well for you  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
~~ Noah ~~ Wonderfuly writen truly the words of someone in love.I hope whoever this is about thinks as much sweet things about you as you do bout them Ü stay sweet ~~LWF~~ |
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