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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-01-01 03:29 PM


I'll Keep On Loving You

Naively I thought that we
could be together forever.
Innocently I wanted to experience
every given moment of pleasure.
Secretly I wondered if I had the strength
to be everything that she required
and if she could be my special one
or simply the object of my lustful desire.
Openly I gave her every part of me and in
foolish mediocracy eventually took it all away.
Now I understand that my worst mistake
was giving up before we were through.
For now I know that you haven't given up on me
and I finally realize that every piece of my heart
wants to keep on loving you.

JamesLee
December26
2001

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1 posted 2002-01-01 03:32 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I hope that she too feels the same way and together you will share each others love happily! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are sooooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-01 04:14 PM


I hope she will keep on loving you too!!
You are very loveable James! Never give up.

RP

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3 posted 2002-01-01 04:18 PM


Oh, James Michael, there is nothing wrong with opening your heart.
I wish I could send a special wave your way with a guarantee for happiness....

I am/Kathleen/

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-01-01 04:50 PM


James - keep on loving. How could she resist these writings that you do....

BC

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5 posted 2002-01-01 04:55 PM


As long as there's love there is hope. Great poem.
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6 posted 2002-01-01 05:05 PM


enjoy
CocoBaci
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7 posted 2002-01-07 02:08 AM


sigh...
James, you share with us another touching write sweetie...
Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-07-30 01:10 AM


Thank you for the wonderful responses...James
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