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SEA
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0 posted 01-01-2002 12:51 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA




Early morning rise
hot steaming brew
Tries desperately to warm out
These thoughts of you

Hazy remembrance
Of last night’s dream
Soft and sweet
Like sugar and cream

Sipping slowly
Savoring each drop
Hoping to make
These thoughts of you stop

Guess I’ll need more
Of this strong Java brew
To wake away
These thoughts of you


~SEA~

© Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-01-2002 12:54 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

With sweet thoughts like this Susan, I'd be tempted to put away the coffee and just savour the memories a little longer. Beautifully written ... I enjoyed the whole concept you captured in this piece, just lovely!

Best wishes and Happy New Year to you!
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(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, every night I dream of my love, I think of her hours after I get up, and just want to go back to bed and dream of her throughout the day! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo lovely! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Sea,
A lovely write, throughly  enjoyed. *L*
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4 posted 01-01-2002 01:03 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Reminds me of the line in a Stones song...'just can't seem to drink ya off my mind'.  Though, don't think they were talking about coffee!
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5 posted 01-01-2002 01:54 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

This is so beautiful, Susan, there is a peace about it and I think many of us cherish that early morning time, I know that I do.  When I arise, I relish the quiet and the moment just before the sun comes up?  Oh, God, you can't match it.  Enjoyed this.

I am/Kathleen/

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Hey Sue!  Happy New Year and what a lovely write!  Enjoyed this and know what you mean.  Don't you just hate it when you are having a really good dream, and you start to wake up at the best part....so you try to go back to sleep really quick and get back into it where you left off?  
Oh...sorry...I started to ramble, which I do when I get excited....great write!
Hugs sweetie!

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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*giggling* not me......if I am having such sweet dreams I just want to stay in them as long as I can. What a wonderful poem. I love it. Hope the Java works. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Try some green tea...yummy...James
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This is lovely, Sea.  Joyce
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Susan,
your writing as of late has been wonderfully fantastic! your writing has always struck a chord with me and hit close to home, but lately girl you have been outdoing yourself and this piece here is a perfect example of what I'm talking about! Take care hon! Best wishes for the new year.

Amy

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Ahh, SEA, this is most genteel in the flow...very nicely done...very gentle smile
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Ok...ok...you can quit showing off now...excellent use of words...wonderful imagery, and you post a pic that suits the mood wonderfully...

have I told you lately how PROUD I am of you?
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13 posted 01-01-2002 04:49 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

I absolutely love it and relate. Great love poem.
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Susan, would it help if I joined you for a coffee?
Loved this.
Dee

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SEA - the artwork flows right into this writing. And you do write from the heart...

BC
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Beautifully done, SEA~.  I can't do what you can...if I tried it would come out horrible.

Something like hypodermically hooking myself up to the pot!!  See, I told you!  Horrible.  It's a wrong thing!

Seriously, though, really great write.  Your work is always a pleasure to read.
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nice write
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dug it Sea.....that residue of thought...
well done lady
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got an extra cup?-- lovely as usual SEA--

...and where do you find all these beautiful paintings?

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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Beautifully done, Sue...
Would it help if he were decaffienated?

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

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Aw shux, gal, just go on back to sleep and forget the coffee

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Susan - Forget the sugar and cream, you need a little whiskey in that coffee to help you forget.   Nice write.

Dave
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Now you just know what I am going to say right? LOL - sure hope you didn't get his name tattooed on you?  Oh I just couldn't resist it!  It is that little inside of me!   This was lovely in its complete presentation Susan.
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Susan,
Such sweet memories of you. Wonderful.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

 
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