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Dreamers Dream (Challenge) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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A calm silence can be heard within the still of the night dreamers dreams are stirred Hidden under the moonlight the dreams of the world exist within the still of the night. The earth blanketed in mist underneath moonlit skies the dreams of the world exist. Nature hears the sighs lovers fall in love underneath moonlit skies. A silver moon shines above across the boundaries of space lovers fall in love. Here in this quiet place across the boundaries of space calm silence can be heard dreamers dreams are stirred. (This form is called a terzanelle. I challenge anyone familiar with the form to try it. It's a rather fun (and aggravating!) form to try. Have fun with it. Happy New Year to all!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-01-2002 07:23 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Ooooohhhhhh...I love it, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet serenity fills your gorgeous words! I've never heard of a terzanelle, but I'm going to learn to write one! (kiss on cheek) HAPPY NEW YEAR, SWEET FRIEND, WE ALL LOVE YOU SO SO MUCH!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've composed this beautifully Gentle Spirit .. this appears to be a very challenging format, and I enjoyed it immensely, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love it. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is absolutely beautiful. I love the flow and feel....*grin* I love to dream......and this is made for dreamers. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A lovely dream poem, in a format I do not know. A gentle dreamlike flow of words. Well done. Happy New Year to you. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This is a form I don't think that I would want to tackle! This seems to be a hard form, and from what I just researched on this form, you seem to have mastered it well. This is a challenge for sure~~and you seemed to have captured it well. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
you did a beautiful job with it. Wrote a villanelle once so i know a little about how hard this probably was. well done. JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Terzanelle I thought was cousin to a gazelle Well done and Happy New Year! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all. This is a very challenging form. LOL...Interloper I don't know if their cousins or not, but there is another form called a Ghazelle. We can save that one for another day though.. ....lmao.....it's a hard form also!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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