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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-01-01 01:01 AM

On this mild night with mild wind
stepping on the thin air of the last breath
of December's rememberance, with wine
of bitter sweet closing our thoughts
of hesitation, we ponder towards the glimpse
of first light in the new page in our memory.

Waiting with uncertainties yet with hopes,
with certain comfort in the moistness of the air,
the mind is in an unclear state of doubt.
With the silence awakes the lonely soul
of the ground, which may solace The Heart of Troubles,
that would rekindle its goodness under the solos of pianos.

As choruses echo back from the ends of the streets,
the scents of candles bring warmth to sleeves,
as the candles' light quiets the storm of the minds.
As the flames come to the end, the year closes,
our bodies soften into the sofa
with sweet rememberance of yesterday's dreams.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

Ousiders Cattermole
Junior Member

since 2001-11-02

Posts 27

1 posted 2002-01-01 01:08 AM

That was beautiful and gracious.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-01 01:14 AM

(smiles) Yes, may His echo of Love forever echo in all our hearts and alleviate us of our burdens and bring us hope and love! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2002-01-01 03:21 AM

Outsider! Glad to see you here! It so rare I see you here and first time you comment on my poems! Cool. Happy New Year

Noah: You're always so sweet and so cheerful and cheering people up

Hope you will have a perfect year 2002. Happy New Year! Love ya.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-01-01 06:06 AM

aries_luv_ppl-
   Oh..this is such a soft and gentle write.
   Left me with a peaceful feeling.
   Just lovely.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-01-01 03:02 PM

"Our bodies soften into the sofa."
Enjoyed your words...James

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2002-01-01 03:05 PM

Beautifully composed Aries_luv_ppl ... a wonderfully tranquil piece of remembrance at the dawn of a new year ... just lovely! Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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