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EagleOne
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0 posted 2001-12-31 11:45 PM


It seemed appropriate that I dedicate this one to my angel. Thank you for being all that you are!


Angels' Breath


How do I tell you
What you are to me
You are the moon and stars
You are the air I breathe

You are the winters wind
Whispered in the trees
You are the flaxen sands
And the frozen crystal seas

You are the angels' breath
Laid upon my soul
You gave to me my life
When I'm with you I'm whole

You are this and more
To all it's plain to see
And still this love it grows
Even though it cannot be!



© Copyright 2001 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-31 11:47 PM


Hold onto that angel, Eddie!!!!  They don't come around often you know!

I am/Kathleen/

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-31 11:47 PM


*sigh* I was smiling with happiness until the very end then my heart broke for you. This is a stunning poem from the heart. I love it. AND CONGRADULATIONS ON YOUR 200Oth POST..THE PERFECT CHOICE. **big hugs** HAPPY NEW YEAR, DEAR MAN. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (12-31-2001 11:51 PM).]

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-12-31 11:49 PM


Beautiful Post for your 2000th!!
Congratulations and a Happy New Year!
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-12-31 11:50 PM



A beautiful gift, to take from the old,
to bring into the new...
happy 2002 to the both of you!

EagleOne
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5 posted 2002-01-01 12:05 PM


Kathleen ~ Oh! I know my friend, I know all too well, thank you, take care!

Karen ~ Keep smiling!, I rejoice in simply having known her. Thank you my friend.

Nancy ~ Thank you, I look forward to the New Year!

Sunshine ~ Friendship is always a beautiful gift. I very much like your thought of taking from the old to bring to the new. I thank you!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

mutington
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6 posted 2002-01-01 12:35 PM


Such beautifully written elegant words, and declaration of love.

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S  MEADOWS



RosePetal
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7 posted 2002-01-01 12:46 PM


Congrats to you on 2000 posts!! This poem is so very beautiful, Im going to put it in my library! I agree with IrishRose, hold onto that ANGEL. Happy New Year

RP

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8 posted 2002-01-01 12:59 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are sooooooooo romantic! (big hugggssssss) May the angel of your heart forever shine with the joy of pure love! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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9 posted 2002-01-01 02:21 AM


another love eternal poem, and it's sooo good.


Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2002-01-01 09:35 AM


SweetFriend~
You gather phrases so softly in the spread of angelic winging~
Beautifully written from the heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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11 posted 2002-01-01 10:29 AM


I can feel the love in your heart...they say never say never,
some wishes do come true...nicely done Eddie

                     ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


Kit McCallum
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12 posted 2002-01-01 10:32 AM


This is such a beautiful tribute to your angel EagleOne. Tender and romantic sentiments to warm the heart. Congratulations on 2,000!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Butterflies_dont_cry
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13 posted 2002-01-01 12:32 PM


May you forever soar my sweet friend, your
words always touch deeply and this beautiful
display of heart and soul is no exception.
A touching write and a yet another reason why
you are indeed a most special poet...and so
much more.  Congratulations on 2000...here's
to many many more sweet one~
Love and hugs~

Elizabeth
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14 posted 2002-01-01 12:58 PM


Straight from the heart, Ed, and beautifully written! Congrats on your 2000. <----I would have raised a glass in toast to you, but we didn't have a smily like that so here's a smoke for you instead. lol Anyways congratulations once again!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Dee
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15 posted 2002-01-01 04:28 PM


Eddie, angels may be hard to hold but they are worth the effort.
A beautiful peice for you 2000th. Congrats!!
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

walker
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16 posted 2002-01-01 04:36 PM


So beautiful and romantic, great 2000 post.
Bill Charles
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17 posted 2002-01-01 05:02 PM


EagleOne - congratulations on the 2000th. A most heart felt poem...

BC

dgvarner
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18 posted 2002-01-01 06:36 PM


You are the angels' breath
Laid upon my soul
You gave to me my life
When I'm with you I'm whole
=======================================

what a lucky angel she is...

much enjoyed..
hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is that dance we do in the space between 'making it happen' & 'letting it happen'"  marci

Tracey
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19 posted 2002-01-01 11:27 PM


A beautiful post for your 2,000 Eddie. Congratulations on the milestone. What a lovely angel she must be, and very proud to have such wonderful poetry written about her.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Martie
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20 posted 2002-01-01 11:31 PM


EagleOne--This is such a touching piece of heart art..very well done.

Congratulations on that 2000

Mother_Earth
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21 posted 2002-01-02 12:01 PM


Eddie, this is so very beautiful.  Your angel is lucky.  Hope this will be a special year for you and yours,  ME
Lone Wolf
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22 posted 2002-01-02 12:26 PM


Exquisite write, Eddie!!  Wonderfully done and from the heart.  You know how I love that.  

Congratulations on your 2000th!!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

EagleOne
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23 posted 2002-01-02 01:26 AM


Joyce ~  Thank you, I appreciate you stopping by.

RosePetal ~ Glad you enjoyed this one, thank you!

Noah ~  She shines, thank you!

ecrivan ~ yeah, it’s that kind of love, thanks.

Marge ~  There is much inspiration amongst the angels, thank you, take care!

Victoria ~ Well some love never dies; I’ll wait and see about the wishes, thanks.

Kit ~ Thank you Kit, she certainly keeps my heart warm, thanks .

Butterfly ~ Well they say when you’re in love that anything is possible. There is little else I can say except thank you my dear friend. Love and hugs to you, take care!

Elizabeth ~ Straight from the heart is the only way I know, thank you.

Dee ~ Yes, indeed they are my friend, thank you. Take care!

Walker ~ Thank you for stopping by.

Bill ~ Thank you, yes, always from the heart.

g ~ Oh I think I’m the lucky one my friend, just to have known her. Thank you, take care!

Tracey ~ Well I’ve surprised myself, I never expected to post anything like 2000. Yes, she is indeed lovely, thank you.

Martie ~ “ heart art” I like that, thank you.

M E ~ Well she may well say that we both know I was the lucky one , thank you and take care!

LW ~ It has been to long my friend, hope you are well. Thanks for stopping by, much appreciated, take care!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

Janet Marie
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24 posted 2002-01-02 08:15 AM


How do I tell you
What you are to me
You are the moon and stars
You are the air I breathe

You are the winters wind
Whispered in the trees
You are the flaxen sands
And the frozen crystal seas
======================================

Well lookie what I found
you will already know I love this and the dedication ... and I wont even make any fate and destiny comments
sorry I took so long to get here Eddie...major comp failure on New Years eve ..great timing huh? LOL
So congrats on 2000 my down under POET SIR..
and Happy New Year to you as well.

catalinamoon
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25 posted 2002-01-02 10:56 AM


Love is such a miracle. And you showed that well here. Congrats on #2000, too.
Sandra

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26 posted 2002-01-02 12:20 PM


A beautiful heartwarming poem. floria
EagleOne
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27 posted 2002-01-02 07:39 PM


Janet ~ Ya never know what you’ll find until you go looking! and you know that any comments you make are welcomed, thanks, and take care!

Sandra ~  Yes it is , thank you!

Strbbux ~  I appreciate your stopping by, thanks!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

Paula Finn
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28 posted 2002-01-02 10:57 PM


You are marvelous you know that? Congrats on 2000...and there are other angels...just waiting
Suetang
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29 posted 2002-01-02 11:36 PM


Hello Eddie
Congratulations on your 2000th post, what a wonderful milestone and what a beautiful poem you have given us.  We all need special angels and this was written from a beautiful heart.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

Ivy Rose
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30 posted 2002-01-02 11:50 PM


What a fabulous poem!!!! And, oh, how lucky the woman you wrote it for. ***Ivy Rose
EagleOne
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31 posted 2002-01-03 12:54 PM


Paula ~ I guess that’s the nice thing about angels, they are always out there, thanks.

Sue ~ Yes, we do need our angels. Thank you, take care!

Ivy Rose ~ Thank you, glad you enjoyed!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

Cerenity
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32 posted 2002-01-04 11:57 PM


Hi EagleOne,

I loved this even though the ending was a surprise and very much enjoyed, congrats on 2000,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Kethry
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33 posted 2002-01-05 02:51 PM


Eddie,
Congratulations on the 2000, such a lovely write to get me through the night. The end was unexpected so it's been resurrected.
Lynne

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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34 posted 2002-01-06 02:02 AM


well I've come in a little late but still wanted to congratulate you on your 2000th! nice tribute, lucky angel.
EagleOne
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35 posted 2002-01-06 04:19 PM


Cerenity ~ Life can be full those little surprises, glad you enjoyed, thank you.

Kethry ~ Thank you friend, glad to help you through the night, take care!

passing shadows ~ You’re welcome anytime, thank you.


Apologies for my late response, my computer finally threw in the towel so I can only grab the odd moment at work now.

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

Gentle Spirit
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36 posted 2002-01-06 05:28 PM


This is a wonderful piece of writing!  Perfect for your 2000th post.  Happy new year to you both!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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37 posted 2002-01-06 05:39 PM


EagleOne,

  Awwwwwwwww..... this just made my heart melt.. so sweet

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

EagleOne
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38 posted 2002-01-06 08:16 PM


Gentle Spirit ~  I thank you, and wish for you a happy new year as well.

rosepetals25 ~ I made your heart melt, wow! I’ve never done that before, not that I know of anyway. Thanks

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

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