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Did I Forget To Say?
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Did I Forget To Say? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I forgot something this morning. Silly of me to even consider that. How many days have I forgotten? Or a moment of anger, did not to say... I thought of it on the way to work It just seemed to overpower, haunt me. How could I have ever been so selfish? How simply rude, totally crass of me. I forgot to tell you my dear... I love you. I didn’t say to you.. that I deeply care. I forgot to say...this man so misses you. Even though.... you’re already there. I missed that little peck on the cheek. I didn’t caress the top of your hair. Oh Geee, you make my knees weak Someone please go find me a chair. I love the way you always smile at me. I love those eyes that sensually say I will. I cherish each thought of you, you see. Until my soul and heart are finally still. God gave you to me as a heavenly gift The finest gem a man can hold or touch. For sands of love my hands do finely sift... Yes, oh yes... Dearest, I love you so much. Please my dear, forgive this mere man who lives to touch the ground you walk. A breath eternal to love you all that I can. My pledge to you, this I shall not balk. For within my heart I hold you now to keep you ever secure and warm. For life and love I will ever vow to protect, hold and keep from harm. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think you have more than made up for that little slip with this poem. Happy New Year Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* what a wonderful way to end the year...with you telling Lou just how much she means to you. Absolutely perfect, Magnus....I love it. **big hugs** HAPPY NEW YEAR    Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, Some days I do really well at it...and when I don't I feel bad about it...and usually I will pick up the phone and call her.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Barry! Don't ever forget the little things. *Happy New Year to You and your Lady* ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
karen...YEP...me thinks I will send her an Ecard from Passions...HUMMMMM...that sounds like a really simply gooooood idea, huh? Happy New Year Canada...even though you are a couple of hours behind us... HICk!!!...and I don't drink... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy..27 minutes.... thanx...and "Happy New Year" to you as well See you next year.... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I have a feeling you will be forgiven, Magnus. If she doesn't, I will!!!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and if everyone else doesn't forgive you for this little slip, I will... and then so will everyone that follows this! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, there's nothing more beautiful to open the New Year than to say how much you love her! (sigh) She will always forgive you, sweet friend, for she is always so lucky to have such a pure and honest love your heart glistens and shares to her! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes if we would treat someone like it was the last time we were going to them..how beautiful life would be.. this brought tears to my eyes...but i always cry on new years anyway for some reason.. ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you've left nothing out!!!!! I am/Kathleen/ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
God gave you to me as a heavenly gift The finest gem a man can hold or touch. For sands of love my hands do finely sift... Yes, oh yes... Dearest, I love you so much. Please my dear, forgive this mere man who lives to touch the ground you walk. A breath eternal to love you all that I can. My pledge to you, this I shall not balk. -------------------------------- She is certainly a very lucky lady...... I'm sure you'd be so easily forgiven with this....... Thank you Happy New year ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Magnus ... one would surely be forgiven with words as tender and loving as these. Beautiful sentiments to warm the heart!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
What woman wouldn't melt with these words coming her way!! As usual, a beautiful job Magnus...I'm still so very jealous of her... I sure hope the federal goverment okays cloning...I need one of you..   ~lewisone~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Read to her this poem. No heart could turn away from such sincere words of love. She's a blessed woman to have you. Deb |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Magnus...this gem is worth all the jewels in the world...your woman is lucky to have a man that can see he has forgotten the most precious thing in his life...and then to tell her so...this is so touching...helen |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, And don't you forget it! It isn't your age, is it? LOL What a romantic write. Enjoyed. Thanks. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, "I forgot to tell you my dear... I love you. I didn’t say to you.. that I deeply care. I forgot to say...this man so misses you. Even though.... you’re already there. ********************* God gave you to me as a heavenly gift The finest gem a man can hold or touch. For sands of love my hands do finely sift... Yes, oh yes... Dearest, I love you so much. Oh I reallyyy like those stanzas! This is so sweet.. I'm sure whoever the lucky lady this was for will have no problem forgiving you in full. This one is going in my libraryy. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Beautiful ,how thoughtful you are. lucky girl she is. floria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I would say a man that definately appreciates his blessings...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow...I wanted to address each of you in saying thank you for your warm words... Just been hard to catch up lately... That and a head cold... Thanx ALL of you...each and every one... |
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