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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

0 posted 2001-12-31 10:41 PM

Your Melody Of Words

Alone tonight I search the stars
to find my dream lover
Gazing beyond Venus and Mars
wanting to discover

A light I see in distant night
that’s drawing me closer
The flame burns hot that you ignite
dear master composer

I hear on the wind a whisper,
a gentle, sweet caress
As it fills my soul completely
I sigh with tenderness

Your words flow softly in my soul
like music in the air
Of passion and love you extol
with true love you declare

Your melody of words I read
playing love’s perfect tune
As my dream lover you proceed
with thoughts that make me swoon

I reach to touch the heart of you
but am forced to withdraw
Right now, my dreams, I’ll not pursue
I’ll wait harmonic law

Karen Torbiak 2001

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-12-31 10:44 PM

Beautiful dream. I hope it comes to pass soon.
Happy 2002
Sandra

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-12-31 10:51 PM

Karen...there you go weaving again...Our
master weaver at work...did you eat any
oysters today by any chance???

I understand that clams do the same thing
as oysters...Is that true?

Nicely written lady...as always...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-12-31 10:55 PM

Beautifully penned Karen!
*Hugs, and a Happy New Year, Nancy*

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2001-12-31 10:56 PM

Well I agree with Magnus, you are a master of the weave, excellent! May the New Year bring all that you wish for my friend, take care!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-12-31 11:01 PM

Sandra...oh yes..the dream is so beautiful...and one never knows what a New Year will bring. I wish you to have this dream too in the New Year. **big hugs** HAPPY NEW YEAR, DEAR ONE.

Barry....silly man...of course I have been eating oysters. I have a whole quart of them here for me to eat all alone. I love them....mmmm I have never heard that about clams....but I can guarantee that oysters work...I guess, since there is no man around that means I should be careful how many I eat. *giggling very wickedly* hugs HAPPY NEW YEAR...Give my love to Lou and the children.

Nancy...Thank you so much...I am glad you liked it. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-12-31 11:03 PM

Eddie...thank you so much, dear man. I too wish that all that you desire comes to you in the New Year. May your dreams become realities. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2001-12-31 11:24 PM

Wishing you well deep into the New Year, AND
NOT JUST ON ONE DAY, as can be a habit with many people...your stuff on the Revelations takes time to read,

that's no clamy kiss either,lol

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-12-31 11:26 PM

Dream lover where are you...many are looking and many will find...James

mutington
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since 2000-11-29

Posts 132
New Jersey, USA

9 posted 2002-01-01 12:29 PM

As always, a beauty in your true style.

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S MEADOWS

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2002-01-01 05:58 AM

Startime-
   This is lovely.
   May all your dreams come true.
   Happy New Year.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2002-01-01 11:02 AM

Karen, you are such a lovely person. I know this dream but I hate it when anything withdraws

I'm in a silly mood today and probably should not be here !!!!!

I am/Kathleen/

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

12 posted 2002-01-01 11:36 AM

Karen I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous

Your dreams will come true darling girl, if you believe hard enough they'll come true.

Wonderful writing as always

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2002-01-01 11:47 AM

Karen,
How could something as sweet as this not come true? *L*

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

14 posted 2002-01-01 11:55 AM

A lovely melody in every word. This is just so romantic and... well..how can I say it? Simply lovely!

Hugs,
Deb

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2002-01-01 12:08 PM

Karen ... with an inspirational dream weave such as this ... the New Year is off to a wonderful start! Lovely sentiments and flow!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

16 posted 2002-01-01 12:22 PM

Beautiful dream...great poem, Karen. Happy New Year to you!

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

17 posted 2002-01-02 01:09 PM

This deserves to be read much more

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

18 posted 2002-01-02 03:23 PM

Happy New Year, Karen...
I hope that this is the year when you will find your dream lover.
Great work!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

19 posted 2002-01-03 03:13 PM

Beautiful....beautiful penned.

Charisma

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

20 posted 2002-01-03 03:15 PM

wonderful weaving of beauty Karen. Happy 2002!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

21 posted 2002-01-04 10:50 PM

Hi Karen,

This was absolutely beautiful, what a wonderful vision of love, very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

22 posted 2002-01-04 10:55 PM

"I'll wait harmonic law" Ooooh nice. floria

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

23 posted 2002-01-04 11:06 PM

Karen - love and romance you write, love and romance you will find. Anyone that can read can see that, you are great...

BC

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

24 posted 2002-01-05 10:29 PM

With this melody and your heart..you dear Lady are someone's dream. So glad I didn't miss this one..Here is goes back around again for more to enjoy..I like being last sometimes. Big Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

25 posted 2002-02-03 08:23 PM

enjoyed ver much

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

26 posted 2002-02-03 08:58 PM

Another magical dream. I really liked that harmonic ending.

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

27 posted 2002-02-03 09:00 PM

This really touched me.
You outdid yourself with this one.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

28 posted 2002-02-03 09:19 PM

Hello Karen

So beautifully do your romantic words flow.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

29 posted 2002-02-03 09:24 PM

As always, your poetry inspires!

*smiles*
~tier

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

30 posted 2002-02-05 04:02 AM

I like this very much. The metaphor is excellent here, gravity, motion and music all in one. And poetic. Very good.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

31 posted 2002-02-10 10:07 PM

Karen, this is soooo beautiful. How could I have missed it earlier? I dream that someone would write a poem like this for me someday.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

32 posted 2002-02-10 10:18 PM

You're sweetness come through in your poetry. I'm sure there's a special guy for you.I love this poem.

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

33 posted 2002-02-10 10:49 PM

Umm..Have I told you yet that its WONDERFUL to have you posting here again, Lady?
This is soo beautifully you! I adore it !

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

34 posted 2002-02-10 10:52 PM

Karen~

Soft and tender write....lovely as always from you....HUGS...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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