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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2001-12-31 06:16 PM



Where the deer runs along paths
of forest greenery;
so my heart runs along
paths of green infatuation.

Myriads of tiny birds fluttering
in the mirror of your eyes,
in the destiny of our two souls.
Hearing the night owl
proclaiming the hedge of dubious
night all around us, consenting
to the call of two hearts
bound together.Seeing those
leaves of temptation beckoning
~~~~~to the misty desire.

Night has fallen, stars shining down
on reflective waters...reflecting
the image of the deer running
along its paths, tasting
of the green possibilities,
awakening to the lingering touch
~~~~~of the heart's green envy.


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-31 06:37 PM


You have a romantic spirit   GOOD

I am/Kathleen/

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2 posted 2001-12-31 07:59 PM






(smiles) Oooohhhhhh...I know just how you feel, I too always envy the beauty and splendor of nature, how birds can fly, how the water always cascades and reflects the rainbows, all the simplest things! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-01 12:13 PM


IvyRose~
This is stunning writing~

'Night has fallen, stars shining down
on reflective waters...reflecting
the image of the deer running
along its paths, tasting
of the green possibilities,
awakening to the lingering touch
~~~~~of the heart's green envy.'


Oh my .... how beautiful you bring the imagery to life~
Thank you ... thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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strbbux
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4 posted 2002-01-01 01:07 PM


Your words are lovely. I can never get enough of nature poems. Floria
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