Why Couldnt He Be an Ordinary Guy

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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-12-31 03:50 PM

I enjoyed a wee portion of romance
but he enjoyed the whole darn pie
he sampled each luscious cherry
a passionate glutton, do or die

I tasted just a golden crumb
the intoxicating aroma
the heat and crimson passion
but I think I enjoyed
more than he would know how
cause the taste lingered upon my lips
while he was busy sharing milk like a cow.

He wanted to count my quivers
instead of enjoying the moment
just a notch on his bedpost
another juicy rump roast
he was a flame dancing
upon the candle in my heart
my Harley in the wind
i never had to kick start

I was someone to fill a void
im not a diamond in the rough
and he is rough around the edges
and interestingly enough
I might not like his clothes
but I loved him in the buff

Maybe I was just a fling
but to me he was everything
I would have given him the world
just didn't want to share him
with all the other girls

ill always remember our bedroom suite
nothing about him was petite
I wish he were Mister Celibate
instead of Mister Cellulite
gaining weight on love
He was delicious as a cherry pie
Why couldnt he be just an ordinary guy?

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

[This message has been edited by Victoria (12-31-2001 04:15 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-31 03:55 PM

(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...such a sweet and lovely poem, sweet friend, sometimes love has its suprises and really has us thinking how lucky we are to hold such sweet happiness close, then other times we just want love to be ordinary and what we expected it to be! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-31-2001 03:57 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2001-12-31 04:18 PM

" he just wanted to fill the void, I'm not a diamond in the rough." oh nice words. I just loved the last verse. great poem. floria

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-12-31 05:41 PM

Thank you Noah and Floria..appreciate you kind words..happy new year to you both

~Victoria~

[This message has been edited by Victoria (12-31-2001 05:58 PM).]

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-11 03:55 PM

aww this is sweet victoria! you are a jem

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-02-12 05:16 PM

thank you hon..haa...glad you liked hugss

~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

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