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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2001-12-31 02:57 PM


Give me your stars on a string,
Watch me take them to the sky,
And then back to you I’ll bring
A love that will make you sigh.

I will take your stars above,
Set them like jewels of fire,
For your eyes only my love,
You, my only desire.

Watch me now, flying for you
Without wings I soar along
Lost in love, our love so new,
Even the stars sing our song.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

© Copyright 2001 Moonlight Romeo - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-31 03:04 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet romeo, may your Juliet forever wear the stars you bring her with glee and eternal happiness! (sigh) The stars sing in all your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-31 03:11 PM


Beautiful sentiments expressed here Romeo!
*Hugs under the mistletoe, Nancy*

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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3 posted 2001-12-31 04:42 PM


Short, sweet, and with a beautiful
message. I love the picture you created.
Simply beautiful!

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Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-12-31 05:32 PM


This is nice

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Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2001-12-31 06:26 PM


Extremely beautiful!!!! This would melt any heart.  ***Ivy Rose
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6 posted 2001-12-31 09:04 PM


Romeo,

May you and your juliet have a wondeful new year! I am sure you will catch a lot of shooting stars****

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7 posted 2002-01-02 10:41 PM


Sweet Romeo. It seems you have done well with the stars entrusted to you. Excellent writing.

I am many.

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2002-01-02 10:48 PM


MoonlightRomeo~
This is just a lovely, lovely piece of writing~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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9 posted 2002-01-03 07:37 AM


Very very very nice stuff!
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