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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-12-31 08:34 AM


Read My Lips

With fingertips brush my lips
Let them Braille my core in sail
Let them dip in taste the trip
Let them baste my awes avail.

Wonder the forest in glean
See the rainbow in its hue
Touch the phantoms in-between
Fires of my senses true

Sense my feel of agony
Hollow of a starving soul
Exquisite of ecstasy
Craving of a wished for goal.

Touch me with your fingertips
Enter into fantasy
Place your lips upon my lips
Feel the taste of ecstasy.

Play a moment on my fife
Be a moment of my life.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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1 posted 2001-12-31 08:49 AM


Well you fired my senses with this, excellent!
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-12-31 09:20 AM


With fingertips brush my lips
Let them Braille my core in sail
Let them dip in taste the trip
Let them baste my awes avail.
  
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Touch the phantoms in-between
Fires of my senses true

Sense my feel of agony
Hollow of a starving soul
=================================
Touch me with your fingertips
Enter into fantasy
Place your lips upon my lips
Feel the taste of ecstasy.

Play a moment on my fife
Be a moment of my life.
===================================


OH MAN ... HAVE MERCY ...
me raspberry tea just boiled out of the mug  rofl

good grief Stinky...I got a tan off the slow burn on this one...
how can something SO COOL be so hot
(could that first verse be any cooler)
me thinks not..but knowing you.. YES!!  *L*
Talk about starting the new year out right *L*
My oh my.... Sy oh Sy...SIGH OH SIGH
Randy flies high and free and its a very groovy thing to see
I gotta go get some iced tea  LOL
very very very cool Stinky...very
me


Kethry
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3 posted 2001-12-31 09:42 AM


Sy,
Sensual in every way.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-12-31 09:50 AM


EagleOne,
Thanks for the hot excellent. LOL

JM,
You have contained the forest fire. But the embers are still smoldering. LOL So glad you liked the poem. But I still feel I get to the edge of what I want to say and can't step over that last inch. WW R S

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-12-31 09:52 AM


Keth,
We crossed, thank you for the sensual.

Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-12-31 10:19 AM



What a way to say goodbye to 2001, and hello to 2002...

Sheesh...make it warm in here, will ya?...

Startime
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7 posted 2001-12-31 10:23 AM


*sigh* sensually Stunning. I absolutely love it. Combine it with full moons and the end of the year and we have feeling aflame that will light up the midnight skies. BRAVO!!!!**big hugs** HAPPY NEW YEAR...May all your dreams come true.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA
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with you
8 posted 2001-12-31 10:48 AM


who needs coffee with poetry like this?! Seymour, this is so luscious! I like it when you write like this!!!
Janet Marie
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9 posted 2001-12-31 11:47 AM


Sy-babers,
I have NO doubt you will cinch that last inch...
and besides my Stinkylove...
getting there is half the fun ... rofl
Reve up Randy and enjoy the ride..we will enjoy the view *L*

Read my lips Stinky ....
  r*a*s*p*b*e*r*r*y*
*winkiewinkie*


Corinne
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10 posted 2001-12-31 12:00 PM


Dear Sey,

As always, your work is so wonderful and fresh.

Cor

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11 posted 2001-12-31 12:27 PM


Very sweet and romantic.  I enjoyed this very much!

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2001-12-31 02:31 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...soooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may every moment of your life be filled with sheer blessings of loves kiss! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
13 posted 2001-12-31 02:46 PM


Touch me with your fingertips
Enter into fantasy
Place your lips upon my lips
Feel the taste of ecstasy.

Play a moment on my fife
Be a moment of my life.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Heating up my New Year's Eve Sy!
Great write...meet me under the mistletoe at midnight, Nancy!

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Marsha
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14 posted 2001-12-31 03:22 PM


Seymour, this is incredible, truly outstanding. Wonderful way to start the new year

Thank you, I know just how you feel


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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15 posted 2001-12-31 04:30 PM


I love this poem and the last two lines are wonderful. floria
RosePetal
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16 posted 2001-12-31 04:36 PM


Oh yes! your lips are more than readable Sy, they are very kissable. Enjoyed this!!
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
17 posted 2001-12-31 04:51 PM


Seymour - most lovely, but not what I expected after seeing the title...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2001-12-31 06:21 PM


Sunshine, Thank you and Happy New Year, *L*

Startime, Thank you for the bravo & Happy New Year, *L*

Sea, Happy New Year & Thank you *L*

JM, I'll not only read them but if you stand under the mistletoe I'll kiss them as well. WW R S

Corinne, Happy New Year and thank you for the wonderful. *L*

Noah, Have a happy and thank you.

Nancy, Under the mistletoe, that's a date, have a happy New Year *L*

Marsha, Have a Happy New Year and thank you.

Stubbux, Thank you and Happy New Year.

RosePetal,Happy New Year & thank you. *L*

Bill, Well I started New Year a little early.
LOL Have a Happy.

Janet Marie
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19 posted 2001-12-31 08:19 PM





*winkiewinkie*

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (12-31-2001 08:20 PM).]

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20 posted 2001-12-31 08:30 PM


Sy, I'm gonna check with Isabel about the "feel the taste of ecstacy" line. If she verifies it, I may kiss you myself!!


Nicely done, Sy!

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2002-01-01 12:41 PM


JM,
Right back at ya. Love ya. Happy New Year.

Balladeer,
You wouldn't dare. LOL Happy New Year

Madame Chipmunk
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22 posted 2002-01-01 04:03 PM


This is so luscious, Seymour

With fingertips brush my lips
Let them Braille my core in sail
Let them dip in taste the trip
Let them baste my awes avail

but I can't seem to picture Balladeer kissing you for it.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

1slick_lady
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23 posted 2002-01-01 08:43 PM


Oh My..................... !!!!
JamesMichael
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24 posted 2002-01-02 10:19 PM


Nice writing Seymour...James
Janet Marie
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25 posted 2002-02-02 01:25 PM


WOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO   *L*  



me thinks ya blew the clapper off the bell with this one  
ROFL

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