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When The Countdown Comes. PdV's challenge

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Dee
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0 posted 12-31-2001 05:38 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dee


When The Countdown Comes

Soft, sweet kisses sent
on the wings of love.
Warm hugs delivered
by angels above.
Words of love, in rhyme,
of dreams unfulfilled.
Eyes shining brightly
with tears unspilled.
When the countdown comes
spare a thought for me,
as I wish for you
right here, beside me.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

© Copyright 2001 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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1 posted 12-31-2001 05:59 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

I like!
Dee
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Thanks Eddie.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

Poet deVine
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3 posted 12-31-2001 07:37 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like it too. We should all be so lucky as to have someone with us at this time. (I hope you mean the countdown to a new year!). Into my library with this one!
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4 posted 12-31-2001 10:10 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Dee, this is tender....makes me think of friends far away (((hugs))) have a Happy New Year!!!!!
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Dee,
Nicely done, enjoyed
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6 posted 12-31-2001 11:26 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dee~
Sweet gal ... I wish you everything your heart desires~

'When the countdown comes
spare a thought for me,
as I wish for you
right here, beside me.'


And thoughts gather good friends in the heart~
You are here in my heart-thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 12-31-2001 11:29 AM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

This is so tender, such love. How many of us feel this way for those who canít be with us at the midnight hour. Beautiful Dee.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dee
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8 posted 12-31-2001 06:36 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

PdV, the countdown to the new year is a time I think of loved friends I miss.

Susan, this friend isn't too far away and I did get to chat to him for a while last night.

Seymour, thank you. I'm glad you liked.

Marge, my heart desires so much...where do I start? You were in my thoughts last night too. Hope 2002 is everything you want and more.

Tracey, it is hard to celebrate when the ones you love aren't there. But I did get to chat to him so it was great.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

Parker
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so the new years here, where's my New Years kiss.
Well, save it for me if you ever visit Canada.

Parker
Dee
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10 posted 01-01-2002 05:09 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Park...

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

Janet Marie
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11 posted 01-02-2002 07:40 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

When the countdown comes
spare a thought for me,
as I wish for you
right here, beside me.
==============================

So wheres my kiss??? lol

This poem of longings gift is its sweet sincerety....I relate to its message well.
Im playing catch up Dee-girlie...my comp is not starting the new year off well...but I  wanted to wish you a Happy New Year and thank you for all your faithful reads ...
and Mark asks me to send the same to you.
Your love of poetry shines in your words to the forums.
take care sweet poetess
jm
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12 posted 01-02-2002 10:05 AM       View Profile for Opeth   Email Opeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Opeth

I Liked this.
Dee
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13 posted 01-02-2002 04:39 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Janet, hope you have a wonderful New Year too. Hope the puter is on fixed soon. Send my love and best wishes to Mark as well.
Glad you liked my little attempt at Sharon's challenge.
You take care too.

Opeth, glad you enjoyed.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

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14 posted 02-11-2002 03:45 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

im sure that person is thinking of you! hope your new year is going well.
Dee
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15 posted 02-11-2002 03:59 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Rose Petal, thanks for the bump Yes he does think of me and I of him. We are good friends and keep in touch when we can.
My new year is going wonderful. My first grandchild arrived on the weekend. A little boy.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

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16 posted 02-11-2002 04:01 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

awwwwwww a baby boy, what is his name?
Congrats
Dee
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17 posted 02-11-2002 04:17 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Thanks. His name is Zachary Blake and he is gorgeous.
This is where I put the announcement. http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum3/HTML/001580.html

Dee

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EagleOne
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18 posted 02-28-2002 04:04 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Just spending some time wandering through the archives an reminicing, and ya know, I still like!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Dee
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I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

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