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Dee
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0 posted 2001-12-31 05:38 AM



When The Countdown Comes

Soft, sweet kisses sent
on the wings of love.
Warm hugs delivered
by angels above.
Words of love, in rhyme,
of dreams unfulfilled.
Eyes shining brightly
with tears unspilled.
When the countdown comes
spare a thought for me,
as I wish for you
right here, beside me.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

© Copyright 2001 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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1 posted 2001-12-31 05:59 AM


I like!
Dee
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2 posted 2001-12-31 06:00 AM


Thanks Eddie.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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3 posted 2001-12-31 07:37 AM


I like it too. We should all be so lucky as to have someone with us at this time. (I hope you mean the countdown to a new year!). Into my library with this one!
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4 posted 2001-12-31 10:10 AM


Dee, this is tender....makes me think of friends far away (((hugs))) have a Happy New Year!!!!!
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5 posted 2001-12-31 10:11 AM


Dee,
Nicely done, enjoyed

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6 posted 2001-12-31 11:26 AM


Dee~
Sweet gal ... I wish you everything your heart desires~

'When the countdown comes
spare a thought for me,
as I wish for you
right here, beside me.'


And thoughts gather good friends in the heart~
You are here in my heart-thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-12-31 11:29 AM


This is so tender, such love. How many of us feel this way for those who can’t be with us at the midnight hour. Beautiful Dee.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dee
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8 posted 2001-12-31 06:36 PM


PdV, the countdown to the new year is a time I think of loved friends I miss.

Susan, this friend isn't too far away and I did get to chat to him for a while last night.

Seymour, thank you. I'm glad you liked.

Marge, my heart desires so much...where do I start? You were in my thoughts last night too. Hope 2002 is everything you want and more.

Tracey, it is hard to celebrate when the ones you love aren't there. But I did get to chat to him so it was great.

Dee

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Parker
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9 posted 2002-01-01 01:01 AM


so the new years here, where's my New Years kiss.
Well, save it for me if you ever visit Canada.

Parker

Dee
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10 posted 2002-01-01 05:09 AM


Park...

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Janet Marie
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11 posted 2002-01-02 07:40 AM


When the countdown comes
spare a thought for me,
as I wish for you
right here, beside me.
==============================

So wheres my kiss??? lol

This poem of longings gift is its sweet sincerety....I relate to its message well.
Im playing catch up Dee-girlie...my comp is not starting the new year off well...but I  wanted to wish you a Happy New Year and thank you for all your faithful reads ...
and Mark asks me to send the same to you.
Your love of poetry shines in your words to the forums.
take care sweet poetess
jm

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12 posted 2002-01-02 10:05 AM


I Liked this.
Dee
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13 posted 2002-01-02 04:39 PM


Janet, hope you have a wonderful New Year too. Hope the puter is on fixed soon. Send my love and best wishes to Mark as well.
Glad you liked my little attempt at Sharon's challenge.
You take care too.

Opeth, glad you enjoyed.

Dee

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14 posted 2002-02-11 03:45 PM


im sure that person is thinking of you! hope your new year is going well.
Dee
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15 posted 2002-02-11 03:59 PM


Rose Petal, thanks for the bump Yes he does think of me and I of him. We are good friends and keep in touch when we can.
My new year is going wonderful. My first grandchild arrived on the weekend. A little boy.

Dee

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RosePetal
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16 posted 2002-02-11 04:01 PM


awwwwwww a baby boy, what is his name?
Congrats

Dee
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17 posted 2002-02-11 04:17 PM


Thanks. His name is Zachary Blake and he is gorgeous.
This is where I put the announcement. /pip/Forum3/HTML/001580.html

Dee

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EagleOne
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18 posted 2002-02-28 04:04 AM


Just spending some time wandering through the archives an reminicing, and ya know, I still like!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Dee
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19 posted 2002-03-01 05:52 AM


I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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