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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-30 10:54 PM


Held In Time

I draw my lips
to drink of you
a mere fragment
of your face
glued upon
my finger tips
is pressed
your touch
in trace

and

if my memory
serves me right
forever will
you be clear
for when I
might have need
of you
I can still
hold you near

"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-12-30 11:29 PM


OneSlickLady~

'I draw my lips
to drink of you'


A consuming thought ...

Happy New Year wishes to you sweet lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA
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2 posted 2001-12-30 11:33 PM


oh I like this very much
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-12-30 11:40 PM


soft, Helen, very soft and delicate.

I am/Kathleen/

Logan
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4 posted 2001-12-31 12:03 PM


May your memories always be clear then, Helen. A very nice write and read...very gentle smile
Bill Charles
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5 posted 2001-12-31 12:26 PM


1slick_lady - I can only say that your writings are excellent. Every one is that way...

BC

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6 posted 2001-12-31 12:52 PM


I like this, too.  You write very well.  Always, beautifully flowing.  
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7 posted 2002-02-20 02:30 PM


enjoyed
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-01-26 05:23 AM


good write Helen
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