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seraphin
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0 posted 2001-12-30 01:08 PM


Take flight across the dusky moors,
The scent of heather
clinging to your hair.
Mist rising from thorn tangled glens,
Ride like ghosts
By your side to where
You join with me,
In bracken thick.
Enfold your hands
In mine.
Entrust in me your secrets deep,
Whispers of pain,
Scars so deep,
Anger buried ‘neath smile tight,
Weary after your long flight,
Through webbed and steamy
Clouds of haze,
To finally fall
Spent and dazed,
Into the comfort of arms so soft,
That will hold you
Through the night
And day
And keep like treasures,
Your worries and cares,
Until once again
You dare
To take flight across the dusky moors.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra Hoisington - All Rights Reserved



© Copyright 2001 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-30 01:11 PM


Sandra,

wow


"Entrust in me your secrets deep,
Whispers of pain,
Scars so deep,
Anger buried ‘neath smile tight,
Weary after your long flight,"


hitting home here........

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2 posted 2001-12-30 01:12 PM




(smiles) Yes, may we all let our spirits take flight and partake through the anger and tears to find peace and solace and love in each of our hearts! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-30 02:52 PM


I love the flow and imagery in this, and felt the touch of the heather and the cool wetness of the misty moors. A keeper poem. Thanks!
seraphin
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4 posted 2001-12-30 11:04 PM


My most sincere thanks to all. ~~Sandi
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