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0 posted 2001-12-30 12:37 PM


I walk the halls of loneliness, in search of broken hearts.
I gently whisper a caress, in hope that love again starts.
My shadow befalls you all, as my mind reads the ink.
A heart reaches out to each,   to help feel well and think.

Romantic words of softest love, I leave inscribed in there
as I wander in search of a poetess with whispers of care.
The darkness of my cape hides me as my words do fall.
From my mind I give you hope, that love will once again call.

For each of you deserve the best, no scorn should you feel.
And the Phantom of Blue Walls will say words that heal.
But now I must depart the halls, the walls no longer blue.
And to each poetess in need, soft whispers I do give you.



© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-30 12:40 PM




BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) May all our loving poetesses feel true love and sing forever in their words with the beauty of roance! (big hugggsssssss) So well expressed, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-30 12:43 PM


*sigh* *sigh* though you are not my phantom lover you give me hope that he exists and that someday he may in reality become flesh. Oh Barry this poem is absolutely wonderful and I am so glad that a phantom love now walks the blue halls of Passions...giving love and comfort to all us poetesses here. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-30 12:54 PM


Absolutely beautiful. Breathless. Rare.
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and your whispers, are so soft.....
very nice

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5 posted 2001-12-30 02:50 PM


Noah...thank you as always...have a very
Happy New Year up in the mountains...

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6 posted 2001-12-30 02:51 PM


Karen...I hope that some day...you will find
that love...One which will respect you and
adore you as you so well deserve.....

And the Phantom walks on...

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7 posted 2001-12-30 02:56 PM


Thank you seraphin....glad you stopped by
to comment...Happy New Year to you and all
of your Family and Friends...

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8 posted 2001-12-30 02:57 PM


Oh yes Sue...they are quiet as the softest
breeze flowing across your skin....

Thanx...

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9 posted 2001-12-30 03:10 PM


This is such a tender compassionate write, and gently whispered.
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10 posted 2001-12-30 03:26 PM


Thank you MidNiteSun....and I hope that your
New Year brings happiness to you and yours..

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11 posted 2001-12-30 06:55 PM


Mr. "M":

"For each of you deserve the best, no scorn should you feel. And the Phantom of Blue Walls will say words that heal.
But now I must depart the halls, the walls no longer blue.  And to each poetess in need, soft whispers I do give you."

You are such a romantic.  Love it, and as I roam the halls, I will not feel alone as I will know that you are there with me.  Thank you.

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12 posted 2001-12-30 07:12 PM


And now Magnus, Will the real phantom of the blue walls please show himself!
Bless you...I think you already have.
And a Happy New Year to you, Mr. Phantom.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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13 posted 2001-12-30 07:16 PM


Ariana...if I can do something that puts a
smile on someone's face...then I have done
something for me too...Thank You...

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14 posted 2001-12-30 07:18 PM


Madame C.   Oh Geeeeee...Now the Phantom is
out of the bag...What am I gonna do now?

Thank You..Have a wonderful New Year...

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15 posted 2001-12-30 08:00 PM



Write on, good poet, write on...

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16 posted 2001-12-30 08:05 PM


And we will....thanx Karilea...

Have a happy N.Y.

Best to you

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17 posted 2001-12-30 08:16 PM


Magnus, breathtaking write. floria
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18 posted 2001-12-30 08:19 PM


Thank You Floria...happy that you enjoyed
this...

Happy New Year to you and yours....

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19 posted 2001-12-30 08:57 PM


Oh, you have said this so beautifully. We do indeed yearn for the phantom. Your romantic words are always so soothing.
Happy New Year
Sandra

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20 posted 2001-12-30 09:01 PM


Magnus...Truly a gentle spirit flowing from your pen. One of healing, one of grace. Your words touching many hearts.  ***Ivy Rose
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