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ecrivan
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0 posted 2001-12-30 12:20 PM



The spark that lets your person glow
the welcomed visit from lost friends on the go;
the chaplin when he calls you from your pew
the teacher who honours you with your due.

The time will arise when you'll have your mark
a personal glow will come from that spark,
it may be a message from a blanketed source
a gentle whisper derived from an unknown course.


Signs, somehow devine, from on high will descend
burning symbols will fall lest we not make amends;
times of unworldly battles need to change,to renew
we cannot lay back when there's so much to do.



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Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-30 12:23 PM


Ah you bring to mind much of things I have followed and studied through the years. There is much yet of signs and seasons...all happening in its proper time. Very well done. I totally enjoyed reading this one. It reminds me of the seven angels I was writing about but never finished. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-30 12:25 PM




(smiles) In every moment in time, we will fight the circumstances that be, and make amends with our loving hearts to heal the wounds with compassion! (big hugggsssss) So wonderfully said, sweet friend, your words are a treasure to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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3 posted 2001-12-30 12:27 PM



Startime,

Let me know when your book on the angels is finished would love to hear about it!Glad it has reminded you of something dear



Noah, thanks for your kind words.



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Startime
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4 posted 2001-12-30 12:38 PM


I have written poems, long ones, about seven angels sent to earth to hope to change the way man was then after that I had the council of heaven start to send the seven destroying angels...if you would like to read them...send me your email and I will send them out to you. I was inspired by the book of Revelations. But haven't finished them all yet. My email is karenltorbiak@hotmail.com

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ecrivan
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5 posted 2001-12-30 12:43 PM


mine is admiral9@sprint.ca. I always took it that we would be faced with a league of seven nations, does it say a dragon with seven heads in the book?Thanks for your reply.Take a look at a poem I did last night called Whole Holes, you might like that too.
  




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Startime
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6 posted 2001-12-30 12:46 PM


There are also the seven destroying angels spoken of. That book is my most favorite and as I watch the world today the vision of it comes much sharper and clearer. **hugs** I will send you an email.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-12-30 12:50 PM


Very, very nice. This goes into the library.
ecrivan
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8 posted 2001-12-30 12:51 PM


yes there is something about what we do that has bee preordained I think but it's all part of a grand design

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Startime
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9 posted 2001-12-30 01:02 PM


*sigh* my email is telling me your addy does not exist...I even copied and pasted....send me a quick email and I will send these out to you. Thanks. your are right there is much that is preordained.....at least that is my belief.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ecrivan
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10 posted 2001-12-30 01:19 PM


sorry imy email is at sprint.ca, I made a mistake, looking at yours.so it's admiral9@sprint.ca


Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2001-12-30 08:40 PM


I love the sentiment to this one, Martin.
When my first husband was dying, I asked him to send me some proof that there was something after death.   At his burial, a big yellow and black swallowtail butterfly flew up out of his grave.

I believe that this is his proof.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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12 posted 2001-12-30 09:14 PM


'The time will arise when you'll have your mark
a personal glow will come from that spark,
it may be a message from a blanketed source
a gentle whisper derived from an unknown course.'

This is a great poem, ecrivan...fantastic message...nicely done!

sp     

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

ecrivan
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13 posted 2001-12-30 09:22 PM


H Mdme Chip,

now you're goin to make me cry too with this
crying smilie, what a paradoxic name!!wish I could brighten your day more, please cheer up now!

Snowpants,

the number of posts you have is a great number my year of birth, thanks for reading.


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