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craigrk
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0 posted 2001-12-30 09:34 AM


Touch

Flesh meets touch
like hydroplane on silk
sensually, emphatically
seducing ego and the id.

Like wind caressing
the budding tree,
your feather stroke,
the most unselfish,
renews my faith
in wordless lust
and quiet love.

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1 posted 2001-12-30 09:43 AM



Craig, you come across quite "studied" and I wonder...which poets do you read?  I'm liking this very much...

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-30 09:44 AM


I agree with Karilea, you have a practiced touch to your poetry.  Good to read you.

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3 posted 2001-12-30 11:08 AM


I just like this.....and I'm going to put this in my library.....very nice
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4 posted 2001-12-30 11:13 AM


So much said in so few perfectly penned words...succinctly sensual.
very very cool write.
jm

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...
I passed that point long ago

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5 posted 2001-12-30 11:54 AM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, this is a true classic! I love it very much! (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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