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flying among clouds
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flying among clouds |
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tearpearl Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 17 |
Flying among the clouds In your crystal ball Tell me what you see With your black eyes Seducing me with every glance Heart stopping Breath taking Pulsating Glance Don’t tell me no I will be swallowed up Ocean of tears Beyond Venus You are my Jupiter Strong Silent Burning with Passion Eyes closed tight Waves of invisible light Penetrating my head I cannot stand on my feet Drunk Dizzy Laughing Strawberry Champagne From your lips Cooling my tongue Milky white flesh Melted Vanilla ice cream In your hands |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmm...soooooo beautfully sensual, sweet friend, your words burn with the enchantment of loves passions! (kiss on cheek) May you forever sip the true champagne of eternal love, sweet friend, this is sooooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
tearpearl...Moving and timeless poem. Loved the imagery in this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Sounds lovely, well expressed and well penned! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
lots of crisp visual imagery here!happy holidays  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
tearpearl, sweetly done. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
I love the last image. thanks for the read. |
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