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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2001-12-29 04:32 PM

The night spirits whisper
through the flames
singing their words of love,
humming their thoughts of hope.
It is the dreaming night as
the Dream Catcher lays full
upon her bed of stars.
Below...the pale moonlight
is glistening as a halo
about the hearts of those
~~~~~~~who are caught
in its river of dreams.
Those who lay still next to
the dancing flames of light.
Seeing only those visions
that speak to the mind,
speak to the heart...clear
hauntings that haunt the day;
yet are just far enough
~~~~~~~into the dawn
to steal away the Dream Catcher's

~~~~~~~~radiant breath.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-12-29 04:35 PM

Ivy Rose,
Nice entrance, I like the way the Dream catcher stole my breat, very soft and entrancing.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-12-29 04:41 PM

Ivy Rose,
A nice write enjoyed the post.

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

3 posted 2001-12-29 08:42 PM

Nicely written, enjoyed muchly.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-12-29 08:51 PM

A sensually soft and alluring write..
Much enjoyed...

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-12-29 08:57 PM

Beautiful, Ivy Rose. I believe this is an Indian legend, yes...? You tell it very well

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-12-29 09:24 PM

Lovely Ivy Rose....just lovely. ~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2001-12-29 09:39 PM

A very enjoyable read, well done!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-12-29 09:45 PM

welcome to Passions and I love your name! This is indeed very lovely!

I am/Kathleen/

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-12-29 09:47 PM

(sigh) Such celestial and heavenly beauty fill your words, sweet friend, I can't wait to read again all your spiritual and Native American legendry here! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2001-12-30 12:47 PM

It is the dreaming night as
the Dream Catcher lays full
upon her bed of stars.
Below...the pale moonlight
is glistening as a halo
about the hearts of those
~~~~~~~who are caught
in its river of dreams.
Those who lay still next to
the dancing flames of light.
==================================

your imagery is wonderful...this is superb poetic story telling...
very cool poem...mystical and magical.
Very well done poetess Ivy
jm

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...
I passed that point long ago

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-12-30 06:33 AM

Ivy Rose-
   This is beautifully penned.
   Much enjoyed reading this.
   Welcome to Passions!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

12 posted 2001-12-30 11:08 AM

I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! It is so very good to see your wonderful visions gracing our blue pages, Ivy. I have so missed the magic of your writing. Welcome to Passions. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (12-30-2001 11:16 AM).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-12-30 04:42 PM

You have written this with great beauty. I enjoyed it very much

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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