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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-12-29 02:50 PM




Fresh scent of raindrops
set pink upon shattered green
thorns beneath sweet rose

Whispers of the rain
between layers of silky
diamonds upon rose

Precious drops within
new life of wondrous secrets
reflect inner rose



~*Theresia~*  


[This message has been edited by Charisma (12-29-2001 02:55 PM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-29 02:56 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, these are soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I loved envisioning the dew drops on the pedals in the second one and smelling the perfume in the other ones! (kiss on cheek) You always create such supernatural visions, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-29 10:21 PM


I found these beautiful rose poems sitting on page 3!  Yikes!   Back to the top with you, dear one.

I am/Kathleen/

Kethry
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3 posted 2001-12-30 08:27 AM


Charisma,
What a rosy outlook you have.
Keth.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2001-12-30 08:46 AM


These are great read. I am now inspired for a day of haiku. thanks.
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5 posted 2001-12-30 08:48 AM



Ah Charisma, this is so lovely, so pleasing...like dew to the petal itself...

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6 posted 2001-12-30 01:03 PM


Charisma~
What a delicate trip to the garden of your mind!
Love it ... just LOVE IT~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-12-30 01:09 PM


you knew I'd love these how beautiful!!!!! the shattered green is awesome..
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8 posted 2001-12-30 03:24 PM


now you know I LOVE these. Roses are sooo gorgeous, I especially like pink ones!
outstanding work Charisma!

love,
RosePetal

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9 posted 2001-12-30 05:48 PM


Charisma - can't believe I almost missed this one...

BC

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