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Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

0 posted 2001-12-29 08:37 AM

               Take My Hand

Come, give me your hand.
   We can fly, or just walk hand
         in hand over this land.

Be my friend, my soulmate, my love.
    Dream with me, and we will fantasize
          about the clouds above.
Come with me on the highway of life,
      a wonderful trip - a mysterious pattern of
           happiness, peace and strife.

I will be right there with you
       I will never leave your side.
           I will never cheat or lie
               and forever promise to comply.

I extend my heart to you.
           Just reach out –
               hold on tight and dream with me.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-12-29 10:07 AM

Be my friend, my soulmate, my love.
    Dream with me, and we will fantasize
          about the clouds above.
Come with me on the highway of life,
      a wonderful trip - a mysterious pattern of
           happiness, peace and strife.
=====================================

a lovely dream indeed ... and promises that we all wish to hear from someone.
well done poetess Ariana ...
reminded me of that song..Dream a little dream with me.
Happy New Year...may your dreams come true

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...
I passed that point long ago

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

2 posted 2001-12-29 10:12 AM

Janet Marie:
Thank you for your kind reply. I wish you a Happy New Year too!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-29 11:21 AM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet Adriana, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Your romnantic heart always shines withy loves beauty! May you forever walk hand in hand in pure joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Adriana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-12-29 12:03 PM

BRAVO!!!!What man could not take you up on such a romantic offer as this. I love it. You weave love so well. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2001-12-29 01:49 PM

Ariana - always knew that you could write well. A lovely romantic poem. Keep writing them.

BC

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-12-29 01:54 PM

Such a simple and beautiful request. Now to find the one who will understand..
Nice writing.
Sandra

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

7 posted 2001-12-29 02:35 PM

Ariana, such beautiful words from a beautiful heart! Great write here and I loved it! Thansk for sharing

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2001-12-29 03:06 PM

Noah: Thank you, thank you, thank you for your gracious comments (and of course the kiss on the cheek). I am so glad that you liked it.

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

9 posted 2001-12-29 03:10 PM

Startime: That special man (not sure where yet) will hopefully take me up on it. Thank you for stopping by. (thanks for the hug too)

BC: Yes - your words of encouragement are appreciated. Thank you.

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

10 posted 2001-12-29 03:21 PM

Sandra: I am on a mission to find just that certain somebody who will understand. Thanks for stopping by. Coming from a superb poet as yourself, I appreciate the compliment.

Saunni:
Thank you for stopping by. I love to write, even though it may take me quite some time, but once it is done, I post it. I am glad that you liked it.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-12-29 05:50 PM

Beautiful penned...enjoyed every line and like it very much!

Charisma

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2001-12-29 05:58 PM

Ariana, sounds like a mission destined to be successful! What man could refuse such beautiful words and promises? I wish you all the best!

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

13 posted 2001-12-29 06:23 PM

Great poem.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-12-29 07:08 PM

OK...if you keep writing romance as well as
you are...I am gonna have to cut in the
afterburners and really start cranking out
some scorchers....

Nicely done Ariana...Have I said enough???

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

15 posted 2001-12-30 02:10 AM

Charisma:  Thank you for such a nice compliment.  I am happy that you liked it.

Balladeer:  Thank you for stopping by.  I hope my mission is successful and if it is, you will be the first to know.

walker: Happy that you liked it and invite you to stop by again.

Now Mr "M":  I am waiting for the scorchers - start the afterburners and start cranking.  Thank you for your nice words - coming from a pro is quite a compliment.  And by the way, you can say as much as you want.  Always welcome.

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