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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-12-29 12:56 PM


Loves Embrace

There is so much that I want to say
Like I love you more each passing day
You fill my heart with a quiet peace
My fears and sorrows you release

I’d like to take this moment in time
To tell you that you’re simply sublime
Love like yours I never thought I’d find
Our love is strong as two hearts combined.

I want my life spent in your embrace
I’m swept away by your tender grace
A world of gentle love you create
Lost in your arms seems to be my fate

Thank you for loving me like you do
For your giving heart I will be true


"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-29-2001 01:16 PM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-12-29 12:57 PM


Tara! Don't delete this one LOL I can read it fine, could the other one too LOL

it's beautiful

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2 posted 2001-12-29 12:58 PM


Perfect...that's love and a wonderful celebration of 2,000 posts! Sweet.
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3 posted 2001-12-29 12:59 PM


Susan -  I have NO idea what I did. LOL. *sighs* It's late? Can I use that as an excuse? *chuckles* Thank you for stopping in

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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4 posted 2001-12-29 01:00 AM


<-----replies in the most eloquent way he can think of, causing your face to turn really, really red......


i love this, and i love you too, honey.
-Dave

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5 posted 2001-12-29 01:05 AM


Larry - Thank you I didn;t think I'd get to 2000.. it took me forever...hehe.

Dave - There is only one thing to say.. I love you too babe.

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6 posted 2001-12-29 01:17 AM


Tara as usual your words bring a smile to my face. I love this! Its awesome! CONGRATS on the 2000th post! SOrry its a lil belated!

HUGS
LOVE YOU
TER

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7 posted 2001-12-29 01:42 AM


When love is right...write it.
When love is not...dance.

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8 posted 2001-12-29 07:15 AM


Awwwww....this is lovely!!! And there is SO much love in this thread..sigh!

Into the library!

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9 posted 2001-12-29 09:29 AM


Terry - Thank you for you kind words. *hugs* I'm glad you liked

Duncan - Thanks cowboy I'm happy you stopped in.

Poet - I'm glad you liked And I'm honored you'd put a peice of mine in your library.. Thank you

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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10 posted 2001-12-29 09:38 AM


This is a beautiful poem of love.
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11 posted 2001-12-29 10:42 AM


rp25,
So what happened to that thread where we were having fun? Was I dreaming or was I dancing with SEA?

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12 posted 2001-12-29 10:48 AM


*sigh* your love speaks so well through your words. I love this. Congradulations on your 2007th post. You have picked the perfect poem for it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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13 posted 2001-12-29 10:54 AM


Larry -  YOUUUUUUUUUUU left early *sighs* aye aye aye.. the party continued without you....
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Stop on in We have an electronic bull and everything *chuckles*


Karen - Thank you so much for your wonderful words I'm glad you liked it.

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14 posted 2001-12-29 10:55 AM


Rosepetalls.. this is soooo nice. I love it.
Congrats on your 2000 post. floria

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15 posted 2001-12-29 11:07 AM




YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) CONGRSATULATIONS, SWEET FRIEND, MAY TRUE LOVE ALWAYS FILL YOUR HEART! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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16 posted 2001-12-29 12:26 PM


Congratulations on your 2000th post, Tara.  Much enjoyed!

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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17 posted 2001-12-29 01:10 PM


Congrats on 2000!  I really enjoyed this... very beautiful display of your emotions.     Thank you for sharing this.

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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18 posted 2001-12-29 01:13 PM


This is beautiful Tara. The love between you and Dave shines so brightly. Congratulations on reaching 2,000.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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19 posted 2001-12-29 01:17 PM


Hi!! I'm new to this forum; but I really enjoyed this poem. Tremendous passion in its words.  ****Ivy Rose
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20 posted 2001-12-29 01:43 PM


What a beautiful poem here! I really enjoyed this and I hope this great love of yours is there until the end. Great write.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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21 posted 2001-12-29 01:49 PM


This is simply beautiful!
Congrats on your 2000th post!
*Sorry I missed the party last night...
But I read all about it this morning*
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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22 posted 2001-12-29 02:01 PM


Floria - Thank you for coming in. I'm glad you liked it.

Noah - Thank you my dear sweet friend

Michael - Thank you. And thank you for your help, you never stop teaching me

Marie - Thank you for taking the time to come in and read


Tracey - Thanks I'm happy you liked.

Ivy Rose - Welcome to Passions I'm sure you will love it.. I must warn you.. it is highly addictive.  Thank you for stopping in.

Nancy - Well.. the link is still up. Look in the Piptalk Lounge.... and come join the fun! Thanks for stopping in.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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23 posted 2001-12-29 03:57 PM


Tara - "Lost in your arms seems to be my fate."  Great line.  Definitely captures the essence of true love.  Very good.

Dave

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24 posted 2001-12-30 03:05 AM



Tara-
   This is truly beautiful, my friend.
   Congrats on 2000.   
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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25 posted 2001-12-30 03:10 AM


Congrats on yur 2007th post.You picked a beautiful one for it.
Peaches

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26 posted 2001-12-30 06:47 PM


Dave - Thank you I'm glad you liked it.

Vicky _ Thanks for stopping *hugs*

Peaches - Thank you

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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