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Forever More……Lizzy (the DeVine Challenge)
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Forever More……Lizzy (the DeVine Challenge) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Forever More……Lizzy (the DeVine Challenge) My Dearest Lord Bryon, yes, it is me again, Liz when I caress the pages you held (I whisper) my heart flows from the ink of his I rush to write you a few words of my own but the silence is broken by a loud beating tone you leave me so breathless I almost feel faint to you my emotions and words can find no restraint I am a lady and should not speak in this course but when I read you breath is labored and forced you speak in tones so tender and sweet I rush to read you beginning to end complete I finish this letter and send it quickly to you Lord Bryon, Lord Byron I do adore you too Forever more, Lizzy "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Good for you...I once said that I should have loved a poet safely in his grave! I tried to reply earlier but was in a.o.HELL...and it bumped me, but wanted to say, sincerely, that I love your style, the way your words float down the page, seemingly in fragments, only to fit together so perfectly at the end. You grow in your words! Love it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen....fantastic! I love this. Enjoyed so much, hugs, Nancy. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh!! A lovely poem. You've inspired me to write to Shakespeare now! Challenge well met!!! Into my library! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is such a beautiful tribute, Lizzy. Have you mailed it to him yet? I am sure that he will love it.LOL It will get there faster if you email it.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magnificent and a poem that will touch his heart. A lady you are and your words flow with the perfection only a true lady could give them. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is what love letters are made of. . . you've found it well helen. . . great job. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now I will have to spend tomorrow with my nose in a book  I really enjoyed this |
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