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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-12-28 08:31 PM


Don't worry-I am over this LOSER!

Cast not away your only hope
of truest love and magic days
Do not, my love, dispose of me
in such a cold and callous way.

Turn not away the one who loves
with every breath of soul and heart
do not now leave, for it's too late
my very being tears apart.

Close not our possibilities
or give up passions heat we know
do not give over to your fear
and live with nothing but the cold.

I tell you now, you are so wrong
and very soon, I will be gone.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-28 08:34 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, I'm so sorry you had to go through all of this, but I'm also proud of you for having gone over him and going on! (sigh) It takes a lot of courage to do these things and with your loving heart you are bound to find the most perfect love! (kiss on chek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
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2 posted 2001-12-28 08:46 PM


Thank God we can survive, then we create great poetry like this one
Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-12-28 09:30 PM


Gee Sandra, I am glad I don't have to worry about you, and that you are over him.  
Great write though!  Hugs.

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

SmartChick
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4 posted 2001-12-28 10:11 PM


Sandra, I am so glad you are over him, and I don't have to worry about you being hurt. Take very good care of yourself.
Victoria
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5 posted 2001-12-28 10:54 PM


im glad you are over him...hugss..its not the champagne punch talking is it ??ha...

               ~Victoria~

Startime
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6 posted 2001-12-28 10:58 PM


Someday he will realize the treasure he drove away and then it will be too late for it would have slipped out of his reach. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven
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7 posted 2001-12-28 11:43 PM


loser. . . yeah, that's one word for it. . .

great job Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-01-01 03:38 PM


Love if it isn't genuine and not working out can become like old clothes that we need to cast off.  There comes a time to go and buy some new clothes that look and fit better...might be time to go shopping hon...James
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