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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-12-28 08:13 PM



Well, not really a loveletter, just love I guess


we had a flickering courtingtime
when apart I wrote letters in rhyme
we travelled a lot
got married abroad
and then we settled down
lived in a flat, in a house with a pet
from the Salvation Army we got us a bed
two kids we've made
not long did we wait
by then we lived in a town

we had our ups and we had our downs
happy laughter but also deep frowns
I am a fighter
but you are brighter
and still we got along
now we're aged and still together
don't ask me how it doesn't matter
for better for worse
that ain't no curse
I think we did not so wrong

1969 till.....?



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-28-2001 08:57 PM).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-12-28 08:26 PM


Hi sweetie,

challenge well met! I hope I find the love of my life soon. I know it wont always be peachy keen and it will indeed have ups and downs! Nicely written Titia!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-28 08:29 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love of your life forever be close to your heart and fill your life with happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is such a beautiful challenge, sweet friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie
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3 posted 2001-12-28 08:47 PM


This is so full of love light it made me smile.  It is very right!
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-12-28 09:24 PM


Beautiful Titia!!!!

Heartwarming on a cold night!

I'm loving this challenge...

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2001-12-28 09:53 PM


A love letter to your hubby..it's sweet. I like it a lot!!!

Into my library!

SEA
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6 posted 2001-12-28 09:57 PM


Titia, I love your poetry, you say things wonderfully   This touches my heart  

[This message has been edited by SEA (12-28-2001 09:58 PM).]

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